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Movie Review – The Oblong Box

ANOTHER GOTHIC HORROR (FUN)

This is another English gothic horror movie from the 1960s.  I have added the word fun into the title because these movies are not particularly scary by today's standards but there is something so charming and fun about them that I cannot resist watching them over and over again.

This movie was uploaded by the Channel entitled New Castle After Dark where two guys present the movie and talk before, at an intermission, and after the movie is over.  They are just as charming as the movies.  They are movie buffs and share insider information about the movies as well as the actors who appear in their movie choices.

I love their format because it feels like you're not watching the movie alone.  They appear just long enough before, during and after to add to the watching experience -- at least for me they do.

If this movie is taken down by YouTube for any reason, here is a link to JustWatch where you can find it somewhere else.

THE MOVIE STATS:

The movie was produced and directed in 1959 by British director Gordono Hessler.  This movie stars Vincent Price and Christopher Lee.  It is the first movie that stared both actors.

The movie was loosely based on the short story written by Edgar Allan Poe entitled "The Oblong Box".  I say loosely because I don't believe voodoo is mentioned in the original Poe story.

Although Vincent Price is often accused of overacting, I think he fits perfect into the Gothic Horror Fun genre!  I don't see his acting as anything but great in these films.

Christopher Lee plays a co-star role in this film but as usual he is, deadly serious, but great too!   Below is a snapshot from the film from Wikipedia Commons.

QUICK SUMMARY OF THE MOVIE:

I don't want to spoil the story for anyone so I'll just give a very quick summary of what the movie is about.  Sir Edward was disfigured in Africa and is now hidden away in an attic room by his guilt-ridden brother Sir Julian.

Sir Edward is tired of being couped up and comes up with a plan that he forces the family lawyer into carrying out with him.  If everything went as planned, it would have given Sir Edward his freedom but of course, Julian throws a wrench into the plans and everything goes haywire.

The plot, although a bit crazy as all plots in British gothic horror from the 1960s is, is a good one.  It's plausible and easy to follow.   This is a great pick for autumn, even Halloween season.  It's a great movie for enjoyment but a good one for writers to learn from as I'll go into below.

 



oblong-box-atmosphereTHE ATMOSPHERE:  The movie is anchored in the late 1800s and brief  atmospheric scenes support his.  This is a good way for authors to learn about anchoring the story in England, in the historical time period and giving it the 'gothic vibe' which I'll be referring to throughout this review.

THE SCENERY:  The scenery was beautiful but it played a supportive role in this movie.  It was just beautiful enough to give the movie a great look and add to the beauty of the movie in general.  Any snapshot still could be a writer's exercise is describing an 1800's historical scene.

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SETS/STAGECRAFT:  I love the sets used in this film.  I also include the lighting in this category.  Although it was a gothic movie, it takes place 'with the proper stage lighting'.  This means that you can see everything and every scene is well-lit for drama and atmosphere.  It adds to the beauty and enjoyment of the film.  Is there anything worse than a modern horror film where you're squinting to see scenes shot in the dark with only one Bic lighter?

This is a great place for writers to look and learn from the ways the background scenes and objects support the scene, transmit additional information, and just anchor the scene into the time period.

COSTUMING:  The costuming for everyone is great.  All of the actors and actresses in this time frame were beautiful, thin and they all looked amazing in their costumes.

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GOTHIC ELEMENTS:  It wouldn't be a British gothic movie if it didn't have the prerequisite mansion, candelabra, harlots showing their ankles, wild pub scene, cabriolet, mist in the woods, silhouetted horse chase or a sinister 1800s grave-robbing scientist!   It's all here and it's all delicious.  This one even has a grave-digging scene which I always love!

STORYLINE/PLOTLINE:  This is a great movie for beginner writers to learn from as there is a crazy horror plotline that does require the viewers to suspend their modern belief system to watch.  For beginner writers, sometimes it's hard to imagine that you can rely on people setting aside their logic and reason to watch, but they do.

This is also a great plotline to learn about 'the plot twist'.  The original plan that Sir Edward had, although it was crazy, it could have worked.  But the twist is what happens as the result of his brother Julian wanting to do the right thing.

There are also a couple of additional turns in the plotline towards the end that have a lot to teach about keeping the tension and surprises coming.  This would even be a good plotline for an author to reverse engineer to see how it all needs to be foreshadowed from the beginning.

FACIAL EXPRESSIONS AND EMOTIONS:

Any movie with Vince  Price is a good one to learn about facial expressions for an author.  He is often teased about over-acting, but I don't agree.  When you watch him from now almost 65 years later, his acting is perfect for this 1960s gothic horror.  His face is very expressive and can teach new authors a lot about the raising of eyebrows, eye movement, and more.

Author Writing Exercise Idea:  Make a gif of an actor responding to an action and then describe it.  Use a thesaurus and see how many new ways to describe the facial movement you can find.   Here is a gif from this movie as an example.  See if you can write this scene.

Death-scene-gif

And finally, this is a great script and storyline to learn about 'clipping dialogue tightly'.  This storyline is a long one, and with the twists and turns, a lot is covered in each scene.  Almost every word spoken -- with the exception of the romance scenes with the ladies -- are conveying important story information.  It can teach a lot about how to keep scene lean and move the plot along.



CROSSWORD PUZZLE:

Try your hand at a crossword based on The Oblong Box

Movie-Crossword-The-Oblong-pin

Click here to do the crossword online.

Click here to download the crossword, clues and answers.



KDP Formatting | Book Branding – Branding a Series

HOW TO BRAND YOUR BOOKS:

LET'S START WITH BRANDING BOOK COVERS:

Whether your book or books are stand-alone books or a series, it is important to take a little time and decide on how you want to brand your books.  After a while, your readers will get used to your brand where they will be able to spot a new book with just one glance.

Branding your books also makes the books appear more professional.  This process that I will cover in this blog post is easier than you think.  It takes about an hour or so of research.

There is a video below where I go into a bit more detail about how to surf around Amazon.com and pick and choose elements to add to your own signature brand.

Below is one example of how Author Lori Roberts Herbst brands her books with the same dog and cat, similar colors, on the front of the book.

branding-books-with-animals

Below is an example of how the fonts alone and a "sweet couple" on the cover can create a signature look.  This would be an easy one for anyone who is self-publishing and on a tight budget.

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And here is one last example for the blog post.  Author BJ Bourg uses not only the same author and title font, but also each book begins with "But not . . ."  Great example of marrying a series together.

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ADDITIONAL BRANDING IDEAS:

  1. DP-drawing-woman-and-computerShared background picture
  2. Shared background color
  3. Shared tonal color
  4. Fonts & Title Placing on Covers
  5. Motifs and/or graphic designs
  6. Glow behind cover figures

In the video below, I go over several examples showing you the different ways that authors brand their books.  You can pick and choose which elements you like and come up with your own unique look.

Go to Amazon.com, look up your genre, and then begin searching around.  In no time, you will come up with a way to create a signature look you really love.

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IF YOU SELF PUBLISH YOU CAN REDESINE A COVER AT ANY TIME

If you have published a book or two -- or maybe three, and you're just learning about branding, you may choose to do a cover redesign.  Just be sure you have a little extra time on your hands because you will need to change up the books on all the websites including Amazon, Bookfunnel, etc.

You may also need to redo or create anew marketing pictures.  But a cover redesign is a good way to create a new buzz about a book that's losing attention.  A new cover can suddenly get you some 'new kid on the block attention'.

 



NOW LET'S TALK ABOUT BRANDING THE INSIDE OF THE BOOK:

CHOSING FONTS:

Different fonts connote different moods.  Look up romantic comedy books and notice that the fonts used are very whimsical or comical in some way.  They go with the theme of the book.  Vampire books have several fonts that are used over and over again as they have a very 'wicked or scary' look to them.

One hour of research online and you will find the best choice for a cover font.  Remember, you want to fit into your category and genre but make the font your own.

STYLIZING YOUR EBOOK MANUSCRIPT:

eBooks all need to be formatted for what Amazon is calling "easy flow".  The reason for this is because eBooks are read on eReaders, Amazon eReaders, Tablets and even online.  The Kindle app allows readers to change the fonts, choose a theme, change the size of the font, and even change the background of the page color.

iced-teaSo when you upload a book onto KDP, especially as a Word document, it is uploading one paragraph and one headline at a time.  Then when it delivers the books, it is like pouring the book onto an eReader like a glass of iced tea.  Most of the font choices will be ignored in this upload.  EVEN IF YOU EMBED THE FONTS!

DROP CAPS VS. FOUR WORDS CAPITALIZED:

Because of the easy flow, I've tested the drop caps several times using my phone and tablet and it didn't get it right from every size.  So I would caution anyone, especially newbies, from attempting to use even Drop Caps on the first paragraph.  If you have having the book professionally formatted, that's fine.  But if you are doing it yourself, an easier way to give the first paragraph a bit of personality is to capitalize the first three or four words.  It gives the same stylish flair to the first paragraph without the worry of what the easy flow will do to it.

UPLOAD AS AN EPUB FOR MORE CONTROL IN EBOOKS:

However, if you really want to have control over the chapter title font and use a fancy normal font, number one, you need to have the license for it.  If you choose a Microsoft font, you won't need any licensing.  But any other font that you get off the internet, you will need a license.  A good place to look where they have fonts you can use anywhere is dafont.com.

Secondly, you will need to convert the word document into an ePub so that the different fonts are added to the style sheet.  There is a program called Sigil that helps with this conversion.  If this sounds like Greek to you, it's because it has to do with computer coding.  I also have a video on my channel about using Sigil to create chapter headers.

I uploaded the sample above using Word and all the different fonts.  None of them worked even though I had embedded the fonts in the options section.  The Ebook converted them all into a default font.  However, when I converted the same manuscript sample into an ePub then the book did show the different fonts.

FORMATTING PAPERBACKS & HARDCOVERS:

Book-cover-yellow-mockupNow, you will upload pdf files for the paperback and hardcover manuscripts, so you can use whatever font you want.  You will need to embed the fonts in the document (which is done from the options section) but however your book looks in the pdf, it should be okay.

The only part that gives anyone trouble is in the odd page vs. even pages.  If you don't get that right, even the PDF will throw in empty pages.  So be sure to see my formatting video on that.

A FEW LAST TIPS ON BRANDING:

  1. First line - Initial caps vs. drop caps (See above)
  2. Indents & line spacings - be consistent - give the reader some breathing room.
  3. Chapter headings and subheadings - If you want anything fancy, you will need to convert to an ePub.
  4. Scene endings - Be consistent, always use the same markings.
  5. ~ Meanwhile ~ Chapter indicators - Be consistent
  6. Chapter title spacings - Be consistent
  7. Offer 10% of next book in the current book.
  8. Include a link to join your newsletter
  9. Include a link to leave a review

CONCLUSION:

It's really that easy to brand your books.  It just requires a little bit of forethought and an hour or two of research.   Below is a video where I cover the research a little more in depth.

BRANDING COVERS:

https://youtu.be/4tyRNjT5F7o

BRANDING THE MANUSCRIPT:



Coloring Page – Yorkie Reading a Book

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Check out my Book Series!

All my books have a thread of Catholicism running through them.

Ryan Mallardi Private Investigations
Jack Nolan Detective Series
Newport Vampire Stories Series

Book Formatting – 6″ x 9″ Manuscripts

In the video below, I did an instructional about how to start out with a blank Microsoft Word document and build an eBook template and then after saving that template, to make a few changes and turn it into a template for the Paperback and Hardcover books.

What makes this possible is choosing the 6" x 9" print size for the paperback and hardcover.  At the present time, KDP only allows you to print a hardcover in the 6" x 9" size.  So if you choose to create your paperback in the same size, then you can use this same template to make all three books.

EASY FLOW EBOOKS:

iced-teaWhat makes it possible to use a 6" x 9" ebook template for the eBook is the easy flow settings that are needed so that eBooks can fit on any size eReader, tablet, or phone.

When you upload an eBook, you are really uploading a series of Chapter Headers and paragraphs.  It is converted behind the scenes into the computerized language of ePub, and then delivered like a pitcher pouring a glass of tea.  It is delivered one paragraph at a time.  Then the reader can adjust the text size and color, the background color and even the font style.  So as long as your paragraphs and headings are set up correctly, you won't have any trouble.

PAPERBACKS & HARDBACKS:

If you choose the same size, the manuscripts are the same.  The cover dimensions will be off and you will need a different sized book cover for each, but the manuscript will work for both.

SHOULD YOU MAKE THEM ALL THE SAME?

thinking women with question mark on white background

The paperback size should be guided by the genre you publish in.  If the books are around about the 6" x 9" size, then you're good to go, but if they are smaller, like 5.06 x 7.81 -- which is the size I use -- then you will have to make thee different templates.

But once you watch this video below, you will be a pro at making templates for whatever size you need.

HERE IS A SNAPSHOT OF THE PAPERBACK & HARDCOVER MARGINS:

Below are the settings for the Paperback & Hardcover.

6x9-margin-settings

CHANGES FOR THE eBOOK:

Gutter: change from 0.13" to 0
Change mirror margins to normal margina
Change Section Start to "New Page" (or next page)
Change headers and footers from 0.35" to 0.5"

REMINDERS FOR ALL MANUSCRIPTS:

Be sure to remember to embed fonts into your documents.  Go to File > Options > Save > Scroll down until you see this section about Embedding the fonts.  Only check the first box.  This information is from KDP.

Embedding-fonts-example



Below is the video where I go over all of the settings starting from a blank Word document:
Below that is a sign up form to get a formatting sheet for the 5.06 x 7.81 and creating an ebook using the 8.5" x 11" Word default size.

MONTHLY Books Giveaway!

Enter to win a copy of Book 1 & Book 2 in the Newport Vampire Series
Limited Edition of 250 signed-by-the-author hardcover books
Winner receives both books along with custom-made book plates and magnetized bookmarks for the series.

BOOK REVIEWS:

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ABOUT THE SERIES:

The NEWPORT VAMPIRE STORIES SERIES is a contemporary Vampire Story told with a subtle thread of Catholicism running through it.

It is a story about the lengths to which desperation can drive a vampire to possess the one he loves.

For Ciara, who felt unloved and unnoticed in the world all of her life, it’s a story of love and being chosen.

For Darius, it is a story of the power, control and manipulation he developed in his quest for blood, love and loyalty.

Ultimately, Darius must learn to give up up control and manipulation in order to find true love.

Each book can be read separately as each story has a beginning, middle and end. But they are best read in order to follow the full character arcs.

NEWPORT VAMPIRE STORIES SERIES is a different Vampire Series.
❤ Secrets, Lies, Deceit & Desperation
❤ True Love, Need, Sacrifice and Acts of Devotion
❤ Vampiric Obsession, Manipulation & Sabotage
❤ Accidental deaths, Secret Burials, Murder & Kidnapping
❤ Vampires born anew
❤ Being chased by the NY mob
❤ Being investigated by a nosy detective
❤ Being scrutinized by nosy family members
❤ Local Scientist with a blood serum Darius wants
❤ But in the end, it’s about True Love, Family Love and
the human need for Freedom.

ENTER TO WIN:

The form is below to enter the September Books Giveaway.  The Rules and Legal stuff is below.  I have used red for the important stuff, but please read before entering.

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Giveaway Rules:

By submitting an entry to the September Hardcover 2 Book Giveaway (the “September Giveaway”), you acknowledge that you have read and agree to be bound by these Official Rules and the decisions of RShannon/ ReadFirstChapter.com, and that you satisfy all eligibility requirements.

The SEPTEMBER GIVEAWAY is open to all humans age 21 or older with a USA mailing address where the books will be sent.  Employees of RSHANNON or READFIRSTCHAPTER.COM, (the “Sponsor”), its respective parent, subsidiaries, affiliates, advertising and promotion agencies, distributors, merchants involved with this Sweepstakes, and their immediate family members and/or those living in the same household of each are not eligible to enter or win. Sweepstakes governed by United States law.  Sweepstakes is subject to all applicable federal, state and local laws and regulations. Void where prohibited by law. No purchase necessary to enter or win. A purchase will not improve your chances of winning.

HOW TO ENTER:

To enter the Sweepstakes, click below and sign up with your first name and email.  Follow all onscreen instructions to verify your email and submit the online entry form (“Primary Entry”).  All entries must be received by September 30, 2024.  (“Sweepstakes Entry Period”). Online entrants subject to all notices posted online including but not limited to Sponsor’s privacy policy.

PRIZES & APPROXIMATE RETAIL VALUES (“ARV”):

Maximum ARV of all prizes: $30 Prize includes: Author signed hardcvoer books entitled Darius –  A Vampire Story and Repossession of Ciara, both books authored by R Shannon, along with 4 magnetized stylized bookmarks.  They will be mailed using USPS.com. 

If winner is unable to receive the book or fails to offer mailing address within the United States, the prize will be forfeited, and an alternate winner may be selected in accordance with these Official Rules from among the remaining eligible entries for that prize. Prizes may not be transferred or assigned except by Sponsor.

ODDS:

Odds of winning depend on number of eligible entries received during the Sweepstakes Entry Period.  The entry invitation will appear on this website all month long and it will also be posted several times to social media.

THE LEGAL STUFF:

Winners will be selected in a random drawing from all eligible entries received.  Random drawing will be conducted on or about DATE OF OCTOBER 1st, 2024 by a representative from the Sponsor whose decisions are final. Winners will be notified by email.  The winner will be required to complete and return an email confirmation of prize acceptance and a verifiable USPS Mailing address.   This verification must be within 7 days of the announcement of the winner.  The prize will be delivered within 30 days of receipt of  verified USPS postal address.

If a potential winner cannot be contacted by email, or receive the prize for any reason, or he/she is not in compliance with these Official Rules, the prize will be forfeited and will be awarded to an alternate winner.

If a winner is otherwise eligible under these Official Rules, but is nevertheless deemed a minor in his or her state of primary residence, the prize will be awarded in the name of winner’s parent or legal guardian who will be required to execute an affidavit on minor’s behalf.  No substitutions are permitted except if prize is unavailable, in which case a prize of equal or greater value will be awarded.  Prize is not redeemable for cash and non-assignable and non-transferable except to a surviving spouse.

Winner is responsible for all federal, state, local sales and income taxes. Any other incidental expenses on prize not specified herein are the sole responsibility of winner. Entry and acceptance of prize constitute permission to use winner’s name, prize won, hometown and likeness for online posting and promotional purposes without further compensation, except where prohibited by law.

Limit: one prize per household. Prize is guaranteed to be awarded.

Participating entrants agree to these Official Rules and the decisions of the Sponsor, and release, defend and hold harmless the Sponsor and its affiliated companies, including all social media platforms on which this giveaway will be advertised, and all other businesses involved in this Sweepstakes, as well as the employees, officers, directors and agents of each, from all claims and liability relating to their participation, acceptance and use or misuse of prize.   Winner assumes all liability for any injury or damage caused or claimed to be caused, by participation in this Sweepstakes or use or redemption of prize. Sponsor is not responsible for any typographical or other error in the printing of the offer, administration of the Sweepstakes or in the announcement of the prize.

Winner acknowledges the Sponsor and all other businesses concerned with this Sweepstakes and their agents do not make, nor are in any manner responsible for any warranty, representations, expressed or implied, in fact or in law, relative the quality, conditions, fitness or merchantability of any aspect of prize.

In the event of a dispute over the identity of an online entrant, entry will be deemed submitted by the “Authorized Account Holder” of the e-mail address submitted at time of entry.  Authorized Account Holder means the natural person who is assigned to an e-mail address by an Internet access provider, online service provider, or other organization that is responsible for assigning e-mail addresses for the domain associated with the submitted e-mail address.

Failure to comply with these Official Rules may result in disqualification from the Sweepstakes. Sponsor reserves the right to permanently disqualify  from any sweepstakes it sponsors any person it believes has intentionally violated these Official Rules and cancel the Sweepstakes if it becomes technically corrupted.

Legal Warning: ANY ATTEMPT BY AN individual, whether or not an ENTRANT, TO DELIBERATELY DAMAGE, destroy, tamper or vandalize this WEB SITE OR interfere with the OPERATION OF THE SWEEPSTAKES, IS A VIOLATION OF CRIMINAL AND CIVIL LAWS and SPONSOR RESERVES THE RIGHT TO SEEK DAMAGES and diligently pursue all remedies against ANY SUCH individual TO THE FULLEST EXTENT PERMITTED BY LAW.

 

October 2024 Books Giveaway!

Enter to win a copy of Book 1 & Book 2 in the Newport Vampire Series
Limited Edition of 250 signed-by-the-author hardcover books
Winner receives both books along with custom-made book plates and magnetized bookmarks for the series.

BOOK REVIEWS:

★★★★★ – Enjoyed it!
I wasn’t sure how I felt about this book, as the cadence of the writing is a bit different than I am used to. Did not think I would like it, but was surprised to find myself being sucked in enough to get the next book 🙂 It is an interesting read and I really enjoyed it. – Joan b

★★★★★ – Wanting more.
I loved the story line. How they mashed so well. I can’t wait to read the second book in the coming future!!

ABOUT THE SERIES:

The NEWPORT VAMPIRE STORIES SERIES is a contemporary Vampire Story told with a subtle thread of Catholicism running through it.

It is a story about the lengths to which desperation can drive a vampire to possess the one he loves.

For Ciara, who felt unloved and unnoticed in the world all of her life, it’s a story of love and being chosen.

For Darius, it is a story of the power, control and manipulation he developed in his quest for blood, love and loyalty.

Ultimately, Darius must learn to give up up control and manipulation in order to find true love.

Each book can be read separately as each story has a beginning, middle and end. But they are best read in order to follow the full character arcs.

NEWPORT VAMPIRE STORIES SERIES is a different Vampire Series.
❤ Secrets, Lies, Deceit & Desperation
❤ True Love, Need, Sacrifice and Acts of Devotion
❤ Vampiric Obsession, Manipulation & Sabotage
❤ Accidental deaths, Secret Burials, Murder & Kidnapping
❤ Vampires born anew
❤ Being chased by the NY mob
❤ Being investigated by a nosy detective
❤ Being scrutinized by nosy family members
❤ Local Scientist with a blood serum Darius wants
❤ But in the end, it’s about True Love, Family Love and
the human need for Freedom.

ENTER TO WIN:

The form is below to enter the September Books Giveaway.  The Rules and Legal stuff is below.  I have used red for the important stuff, but please read before entering.


Giveaway Rules:

By submitting an entry to the September Hardcover 2 Book Giveaway (the “September Giveaway”), you acknowledge that you have read and agree to be bound by these Official Rules and the decisions of RShannon/ ReadFirstChapter.com, and that you satisfy all eligibility requirements.

The SEPTEMBER GIVEAWAY is open to all humans age 21 or older with a USA mailing address where the books will be sent.  Employees of RSHANNON or READFIRSTCHAPTER.COM, (the “Sponsor”), its respective parent, subsidiaries, affiliates, advertising and promotion agencies, distributors, merchants involved with this Sweepstakes, and their immediate family members and/or those living in the same household of each are not eligible to enter or win. Sweepstakes governed by United States law.  Sweepstakes is subject to all applicable federal, state and local laws and regulations. Void where prohibited by law. No purchase necessary to enter or win. A purchase will not improve your chances of winning.

HOW TO ENTER:

To enter the Sweepstakes, click below and sign up with your first name and email.  Follow all onscreen instructions to verify your email and submit the online entry form (“Primary Entry”).  All entries must be received by September 30, 2024.  (“Sweepstakes Entry Period”). Online entrants subject to all notices posted online including but not limited to Sponsor’s privacy policy.

PRIZES & APPROXIMATE RETAIL VALUES (“ARV”):

Maximum ARV of all prizes: $30 Prize includes: Author signed hardcvoer books entitled Darius –  A Vampire Story and Repossession of Ciara, both books authored by R Shannon, along with 4 magnetized stylized bookmarks.  They will be mailed using USPS.com. 

If winner is unable to receive the book or fails to offer mailing address within the United States, the prize will be forfeited, and an alternate winner may be selected in accordance with these Official Rules from among the remaining eligible entries for that prize. Prizes may not be transferred or assigned except by Sponsor.

ODDS:

Odds of winning depend on number of eligible entries received during the Sweepstakes Entry Period.  The entry invitation will appear on this website all month long and it will also be posted several times to social media.

THE LEGAL STUFF:

Winners will be selected in a random drawing from all eligible entries received.  Random drawing will be conducted on or about DATE OF OCTOBER 1st, 2024 by a representative from the Sponsor whose decisions are final. Winners will be notified by email.  The winner will be required to complete and return an email confirmation of prize acceptance and a verifiable USPS Mailing address.   This verification must be within 7 days of the announcement of the winner.  The prize will be delivered within 30 days of receipt of  verified USPS postal address.

If a potential winner cannot be contacted by email, or receive the prize for any reason, or he/she is not in compliance with these Official Rules, the prize will be forfeited and will be awarded to an alternate winner.

If a winner is otherwise eligible under these Official Rules, but is nevertheless deemed a minor in his or her state of primary residence, the prize will be awarded in the name of winner’s parent or legal guardian who will be required to execute an affidavit on minor’s behalf.  No substitutions are permitted except if prize is unavailable, in which case a prize of equal or greater value will be awarded.  Prize is not redeemable for cash and non-assignable and non-transferable except to a surviving spouse.

Winner is responsible for all federal, state, local sales and income taxes. Any other incidental expenses on prize not specified herein are the sole responsibility of winner. Entry and acceptance of prize constitute permission to use winner’s name, prize won, hometown and likeness for online posting and promotional purposes without further compensation, except where prohibited by law.

Limit: one prize per household. Prize is guaranteed to be awarded.

Participating entrants agree to these Official Rules and the decisions of the Sponsor, and release, defend and hold harmless the Sponsor and its affiliated companies, including all social media platforms on which this giveaway will be advertised, and all other businesses involved in this Sweepstakes, as well as the employees, officers, directors and agents of each, from all claims and liability relating to their participation, acceptance and use or misuse of prize.   Winner assumes all liability for any injury or damage caused or claimed to be caused, by participation in this Sweepstakes or use or redemption of prize. Sponsor is not responsible for any typographical or other error in the printing of the offer, administration of the Sweepstakes or in the announcement of the prize.

Winner acknowledges the Sponsor and all other businesses concerned with this Sweepstakes and their agents do not make, nor are in any manner responsible for any warranty, representations, expressed or implied, in fact or in law, relative the quality, conditions, fitness or merchantability of any aspect of prize.

In the event of a dispute over the identity of an online entrant, entry will be deemed submitted by the “Authorized Account Holder” of the e-mail address submitted at time of entry.  Authorized Account Holder means the natural person who is assigned to an e-mail address by an Internet access provider, online service provider, or other organization that is responsible for assigning e-mail addresses for the domain associated with the submitted e-mail address.

Failure to comply with these Official Rules may result in disqualification from the Sweepstakes. Sponsor reserves the right to permanently disqualify  from any sweepstakes it sponsors any person it believes has intentionally violated these Official Rules and cancel the Sweepstakes if it becomes technically corrupted.

Legal Warning: ANY ATTEMPT BY AN individual, whether or not an ENTRANT, TO DELIBERATELY DAMAGE, destroy, tamper or vandalize this WEB SITE OR interfere with the OPERATION OF THE SWEEPSTAKES, IS A VIOLATION OF CRIMINAL AND CIVIL LAWS and SPONSOR RESERVES THE RIGHT TO SEEK DAMAGES and diligently pursue all remedies against ANY SUCH individual TO THE FULLEST EXTENT PERMITTED BY LAW.

 

Movie Review – The Flesh and the Fiends – 1960 film

The live link to the YouTube Video, if it's still available, is at the end of the review.

Here is another 1960s British Horror Film entitled The Flesh and the Fiends.  The story and script were written by John Gilling, who also directed the movie.  It stars Peter Cushing, Donald Pleasence and George Rose.  There are probably other British stars that I don't recognize but these were the three main ones.

I have the link to the movie on YouTube posted at the end of this review where you can watch it for free like I did.  However, in case it is no longer on YouTube, here is a link to it on JustWatch.com.  You may need to put the title into the search box.  This website keeps track of where you can see the video.

If you are a collector, you can purchase the Blu-ray on video on Amazon.

QUICK SUMMARY:

My main purpose is to discuss the movie in terms of how we, as writers and storytellers,  can learn from these early movies.  I'll give just a quick summary of the movie, just enough to reference the topics I'll touch on in this review.

The story takes place in the late 19th century in London.  A scientist is obsessed with learning more about medicine and resorts to paying grave-diggers to bring him bodies so he can dissect them to learn more.   He believes this a noble cause.  The bodies originally delivered are dug up from the graveyard and sold as being "only three days old".  They are covered in dirt and decomposition is already taking place.  Dr. Knox pays four or five ginnies (slang for a 5 pound note) for them and is happy to have them.

One night, two town thugs find out that the doctor is willing to pay up to 6 ginnies for a dead body and they bring in a body they find that just died.  Because the body is fresh and just recently dead, the doctor pays them 8 ginnies.

One of the criminal thugs owns a boarding home with his nagging wife and the two criminals begin 'helping a few deaths along' in one way or another and then sell it to Dr. Knox.  The doctor remains in denial about it, even though his assistants try to tell him something is not right about so many fresh dead bodies turning up.  Dr. Knox is blinded by his ambitions.

The movie is a moral tale (with no lecturing) about both the temptation of money and how it can bring men to the point of evil and a second moral tale of how allowing an obsession, albeit nobly intended, can progress to its own evil.

As a viewer and lover of gothic movies, I loved this movie.  It had it all:  From the gothic old London scenery to the interaction of the lower classes with the upper, it was really enjoyable.



HOW THE HISTORICAL TIME AND PLACE ARE ESTABLISHED:

keresene-lampAs soon as the movie starts, an information panel with the date is posted giving the viewer an exact time frame.  It also gives you the name of Dr. Knox and tells you he's a scientist.  The viewer is immediately anchored in the late 1800s when the story starts.  Aside from this, the scene further anchors you in the 19th century by the fashion, the kerosene lights, the cobblestones, the scientific props and the dialogue.

It is soon established that there is no means for doctors or scientists to get cadavers in this world of early scientific discovery.  The scientists, at least Dr. Knox, resorts to paying gravediggers to dig up fresh bodies that he can experiment on.  That lays the groundwork for the story that is about to unfold.

What makes Dr. Knox appear so noble is that he is also a professor of a room full of budding doctors.  It's hard to hold the grave robbing against him in the beginning of the movie.  He is helping so many people and passing this knowledge down to create other doctors to help people.

A MORAL TALE:

cowardly-lion-moral-tailWhat I love about the old movies in particular is that most of them were moral tales of one type of another.  The scriptwriter and director had a point in presenting the story and it was almost always a moral point.  Today, there are thousands of these 'a slice of a meaningless life with one glorified sin' movies that I abhor mainly because they are empty and pointless.  So the fact that this story had a dual moral tale made it all the more enjoyable.

ALL RICH CHARACTERS:

The characters are very "Charles Dickens like" almost to the point of being comical.  An author can learn a lot about creating characters, especially ones who fit into a Charles Dickens type of story.  The bad guy and bad girl characters were a little over the top -- but not too much.  Just enough to make them colorful, enjoyable and watchable.

It's so helpful to also see how the set director arranged the backdrop of the scenes to add in historical elements, all of which enrich the story.  For example, the cobblestones, the street gas lights, occasional hand-held torches, the mob with torches, even the archaic scientific lab.  These all kept the story anchored in the time frame.

high-class-fashion

This is also a great move to watch to see how the scriptwriter and director portrayed the lower classes against the upper classes.  For example, the thugs wore mismatched, wrinkled, and dirty clothes along with their top hats.  The rich guys were all clean, crisp and tidy, including their white gloves and perfectly tied ascots.  Even their posture allowed them to look slightly down their noses at everyone, including each other.  The lower class men wore pants that were too long and baggy and suit jackets that were ill-fitting.  I don't want to even tell you what their shoes looked like!  These are all very subtle differences when you analyze them one at a time, but they all helped present the striking difference between how the upper and lower classes lived.

NUDITY IN THE 1960s:

This movie was shot in 1960s and, unlike most movies from this early on, there were two scenes where the female breasts were exposed.  It wasn't excessive and it wasn't what I would refer to as gratuitous.  The women were bar whores, so the naked breasts told that story in less than ten seconds.  It was also a pleasure to see real female breasts instead of the silicone half-cantaloupes we see today in movies.

The scenes of the lower class took place in a brawling tavern or pub of some kind.  So the crowd scenes were mainly a back drop for spotlighted action that book place in that environment, so it has a lot to teach a writer about that particular setup.  How to describe a bawdy scene occurring in the background while casting a spotlight on a main character or two having important or at least relevant dialogue.



ALL THE GOTHIC TROPES:

If you're a fan of gothic movies, as I am, you will enjoy this one.  The atmosphere that takes place in the shadows of the London nights in the alleyways, under the roman arch, the distressed cement and brick walls with the hanging gas lights is delicious.

They have a few graveyard scenes which is a classic gothic trope too.  The subject matter of the story is macabre enough to hold your interest and just give you a tiny horror shiver without overdoing it.

CHARACTER ARCS:

The two main bad guys in the movie start out as general ne'er-do-wells that are always looking for a quick buck.  Both actors did an amazing job at creating a colorful character without much backstory.  These characters could have easily been paper-thin had it not been for the character actors who portrayed them.

Once they find out you can make eight ginnies for a dead body, suddenly, they descend into another level of criminality.  And realistically, they go from level to level into full evil.

There was nothing redeemable about either character, but the acting made them both interesting enough to want to know what would happen to them.  This is another great lesson for writers.  You want a bad guy who the reader hates, but not enough to close the book on him!

A FEW LESSONS IN CONFLICT:

When I started out writing, I heard so many times about conflict, conflict, conflict.  All stories had to have conflict.  I originally thought that to portray conflict, you would need to make characters at such odds that they would at least spar in some way.  But that's no so.  The conflict can be more subtle and less emotional.  This is a good movie to watch the conflict between the doctor and his assistants.  There are two separate conflicts and there are subtle differences between each one.

The first conflict is a battle of moral wits that takes place between Dr. Knox and one of his employees. This is a good scene to watch to learn about lower-level conflict.  As I learned along the way, a definitive difference of opinion on something can be enough to present conflict.  The conflict between Dr. Knox and his assistant is a level 5 out of 10.  It could even be described as a difference of opinion but Dr. Knox has the power of the employer behind him.

There is a secondary conflict that takes place later on in the story between Dr. Knox and the other doctors who confront him.  This is more of a level seven conflict; and it could be described as more like a 'rich guy hissy fit'.  There's no violence, but he tells them off but good.  This is seen in many movies and you can see it here done very well.  Peter Cushing does an amazing job with the tell off.  This is also a conflict with a little bit of a power struggle as well.



For the new writers, I'll list below some of the things that help anchor a story in the 19th century and also anchor the story among the rich or the poor.  This is a list I wish I had found early on in my writing career!

If you read this review before you watch the movie, you can see these items pop up throughout the film and see how they anchor the scene in the same historical time frame.

PROPS THAT SCREAM 19TH CENTURY SCIENCE:

1. Personal labs in the scientists house.
2. Hanging skeleton out of real bones
3. 19th century school room
4. Body called a stiff but corrected to a subject
5. Liquor poured from a glass carafe
6. Hand-held kerosine lanterns
7. Heavy, nagging wife with a shawl (always portrays the lower class)
8. References to 'the cupboard', peeling vegetables into a big bowl (lower class or servant class)
9. Water pitcher and big bowl in bedrooms
10. Men and women dancing at an arm's length in ballroom
11. Cobblestones, war-torn looking brick walls, roman brick arches, gas street lighting,
12. Town crier reading from a long scroll about "murder most foul" -- they are announcing there's been a stabbing murder. The people are all outraged and beginning to form a mob.
13. Mob rises up and storms into the streets
14. The noose around a bad buy's neck with a priest alongside for last rights
15. Hand-held kerosene lanterns
16. Village mob justice

OLD WORLD ENGLISH FASHIONS:

Hats - Top hats, fancy hats for upper class, sleeping cap like hats for the lower class
Long dresses, lots of layers - servants usually have an apron over their dresses
Muff to keep the hands warm while riding in the horse drawn carriages
Scarfs tied into bows for ascots
Globe gas lights among the rich
Suits with vests

PORTRAYING  THE POOR:

Clothing is mismatched, rumpled, dirty, and torn
Messy and/or overgrown hair.
Women with balding issues or long straggly hair
Old worn-out shoes
Stick as a cane

RICH PEOPLE:

Scenes are always shot in more light
Estate homes
Expensive oil paintings
Clocks
Men are dressed in crisp suits, well fitting with stiff 'ironed' collars
Ruffled shirts (historical pictures)
Formal settings even the men wear white gloves
Men smoking cigars and pipes
Ultra straight posture, almost looking down their noses

CONCLUSION:

This is a great movie to watch when you're in the mood for an old world Gothic flick.  It's also a great choice for new authors and writers to learn about historical settings, anchoring each scene in it's time, and how to portray a moral tale.  This is a good move to see how to present the rich against the poor.

Very often the movies I watch are posted by regular people and they are then taken down by YouTube.  So I will post the free YouTube video below.  If it's no longer there, you can find it at the links I posted at the beginning of this review.

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Movie Review and Crossword – The Picture of Dorian Gray

THE PICTURE OF DORIAN GRAY - PRODUCED BY DAN CURTIS - PRODUCER OF DARK SHADOWS:

I discovered this Movie Review channel on YouTube called New Castle After Dark.   I love these two guys.   They are a riot together.  The atmosphere is very unique and the way they talk is very entertaining.  It's very rare that you see smokers anymore, but these two are always smoking!

new-castle-after-darkThey present the movies on their channel and they begin with a short introduction and quick discussion about the movie and who plays what parts.

Then they return again in the middle of the movie, like an intermission and again participate in a short maybe four minute discussion -- and some more smoking.  They always add very interesting trivia about either the actors or the movie itself.  They are never boring.

For some reason, watching the movie on their channel with them popping in twice makes it seem like you're watching it with someone else.  I really think this makes it even more enjoyable.

OVERALL REVIEW:  I LOVED IT RIGHT OFF THE BAT:

The New Castle guys in their commentary said the beginning of the movie was a little slow but it got better.  However, it had such a great spooky, gothic, old England feel to it, I loved it right off the bat.  It didn't seem too slow to me at all.  I absolutely love movies that are shot like Broadway plays and this is one of those.  The sets are beautiful although some of the scenes take place in the seedier and darker parts of town and those are not quite as beautiful.  Like most movies in the '60s and '70s, everyone in the movie was handsome or good looking -- not just the mediocre-looking sons or daughters of stars of yesteryear like we get today.  I miss seeing the best looking people from all over the country!

DIRECTORIAL STYLE:  THERE WAS A TOCUH OF SOAP OPERA ABOUT THE MOVIE:

Anyway, because of the play-like atmosphere, no laugh track or crazy 70's music in the background, there was a bit of a TV movie (which I believe it was when it debuted) or soap opera feel to this film but I tend to love this style anyway.

Fairly early on in the movie, I recognized the actor named John Karlen in one scene.  He played Willie on the old Dark Shadows soap opera  back in the 1970s.  I'm a recent but big fan.   Once I saw him and saw the style of the movie, I suspected that Dan Curtis was associated with it, and, sure enough, he was.  He was the producer.  During their intermission chat, the Dark Castle guys confirmed that the movie was a Dan Curtis production.  No wonder I loved it.  They even mentioned that Dan had reused some of the music from Dark Shadows which I recognized in the second half of the movie.

Although the actual Dark Shadows movies were crazy and terrible, I assumed  Dan Curtis was just cashing in on the Dark Shadows craze back then and they were just quickly thrown together.  I've seen a few of his other films which he took more time with and they were great, as this one was.



THE QUICKEST SYNOPSIS IN THE WORLD

Dorian-gray-dan-curtis-blockThe story for anyone that doesn't know it is that an artist paints a picture of Dorian Gray while he is in his youth.  He wonders out loud that wouldn't it be great if the picture could age and he could stay young, instead of the other way around.   Well, that's what happens.

However, the moral tale underlying this concept was done so well in this adaptation that I hope you will take the time to watch this movie.

PRODUCTION STYLE:  THE MOVIE WAS SHOT ON SETS EVEN WHEN THEY WERE ON LOCATION:

dorian-gray-bridge-sceneThese movies that are shot almost like plays are very helpful in setting a scene for a book.  Nothing is ethereal or being described with shooting camera angles or other MTV style movie effects.

The play-like atmosphere gives each scene a stable setting that is easy to take in and think about "describing" as an author.  This is a great exercise for new authors or ones that want to get better at describing castles or cobble stones or whatever.  I'm sure you get the point.

The beautiful sets always add so much to the enjoyment of the movie.  Beauty raises the spirits and lifts the heart.   There's nothing worse than watching a movie in a dirty city being shot live with a hand-held camera.  Nothing like that here.   This film was an upgrade from watching a play in the front row.

THE CHARACTER ARC:

The main character arc was with Dorian Gray.  The production did an excellent job at portraying Dorian's youth and innocence at the beginning of the movie.   You saw the one ch

THE MORAL TALE:

I have seen many other movie adaptations of The Picture of Dorian Gray, but this was my favorite because it didn't gloss over the moral tale behind the story.  It addressed it head on.  The other adaptations didn't really focus on the underlying morality of the story and without it, it was almost like a crazy fantasy movie.  This one was done so well because it was guided by the moral tale that was underneath the story.

I also like that the homosexual aspects of the movie were done with discretion.  They were unmistakable but not in your face like some of the more modern movies.  There's nothing worse than these virtuous lectures that are written into modern movies.

Because the moral tale is handled so well, there is a sense of true justice or true satisfaction at the end.



THE ACTING:

Here was John Karlen who played Willie in Dark Shadows

Because it was shot like a play, the actors had to be really good and they were.  Many modern movies shoot back and forth from one to two lines spoken by an actor in a close up to another close up with the actor responding with two lines.  There's no real acting so to speak.  The older movies and certainly this one showed the actors in action, speaking and moving along the sets interacting with props and each other.  It was great.

As an author, it is a great way to learn how to embed dialogue tags into little snippets of movement in a scene.  By doing this, it's a way to anchor the reader in the scene and to also create movement on the black and white page.

In a movie shot like a play, there are so many opportunities to see the actors interacting with props and each other, how they stand and face one another, how they turn to add a dramatic effect.  There's so much to absorb.

WHERE TO FIND THE MOVIE:

I'm not sure how this YouTube Channel gets to show movies on their channel, so if they take it down anytime soon, here is a link to find just about any movie in the world.  It's called Just Watch and it gives you a tiny synopsis and tells you where you can find the movie to watch for free, rent or buy.

Here is a direct link to it on Just Watch.

DISCUSSIONS ON MOVIES ANYONE?

Every now and again I stop into two reddit subgroups where people talk about movies, especially when I find one that I really like:

HorrorLit Reddit Group

Book Discussions

ANY OTHER DARK SHADOWS FANS?

jonathan-frid-as-barnabusDark Shadows Reddit Group
Dark Shadows Everyday
Dark Shadows from the Beginning
Dark Shadows Fandom



CROSSWORD BASED ON DAN CURTIS' THE PICTURE OF DORIAN GRAY:

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