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Peek Behind the Novel – Writing in Layers – Initial Steps

WHY OUTLINING SAVES YOU FROM THE REWRITE PILE

When you sit down to outline your story before you write a single scene, something shifts. You stop thinking like a writer and start thinking like a builder. That's the whole point.

Most new writers want to jump straight into scenes and dialogue. They've got a great opening line in their head, and they just want to get on with it. But here's the problem: when you write first and figure out the story second, you end up rewriting. A lot. You'll discover halfway through chapter five that your killer couldn't have been at the scene, or that your protagonist's motivation doesn't hold up, and now you're tearing apart pages you already fell in love with.

Outlining lets you put on a few different hats before you ever put on your writer hat. Each one has a job to do, and if you do those jobs first, the writer hat gets to show up later and just write — no backtracking, no throwing chapters in the trash.

Here are the professional hats you'll need to wear:

The Brainstorming Hat — This is the first hat, and it's the loose one. You wear it when you're sketching out a few possible storylines, just to see which one has legs. This is quick work — short, messy ideas, not finished plots. The goal isn't to pick "the" story yet. The goal is to make sure whatever story you commit to actually has enough potential for twists, turns, and a full novel's worth of trouble. Don't skip this hat. Committing too early is how writers end up 40,000 words into a story that runs out of gas.

 

The Story Engineer Hat — Once you've picked your storyline, this hat goes on. This is where you lay out the bones of the story — what happens, in what order, and why. You can do this with short paragraphs, a bulleted list, index cards, whatever gets the structure out of your head and onto something you can look at. It won't be pretty. It's not supposed to be. This is the layer where you make sure the story actually holds together before you build anything on top of it.

 

The Location Scout Hat — This one comes after your story has taken shape in the engineering stage. Now you go looking for the places where all of this is going to happen. Where does the crime scene sit? What's down the street? What does the neighborhood look like? Putting in a little effort here pays off twice — it makes your story feel grounded and real, and if you've ever thought about your book being adapted for film or streaming, having real, scoutable locations gives you a head start.

Wear these three hats well, and by the time you put on the Writer hat, the heavy lifting is already done.  We'll talk about the other hats you wear before the Author's Hat in our next article.

Below is a video I made for YouTube explaining the initial stages and layers of writing.   I go over some of these points but others tips and tricks as well.  For your convenience, I have time stamps below in case you want to just jump to the section you want to look at:

01:27 - Open Scrivener and open one document
01:45 - Other suspects, their motivation, red herring, etc.
02:15 - How it will End section
03:20 - Determining the framework of the script which will prevent writing for the trash can.
05:30 - Review of the layer elements
05:43 - Sneak peek into the next videos

Writing a Novel in Layers:

First - A Little About the Chronology of a Crime

Writing a Novel - Layer 1
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Writing a Novel - Layer 3
Writing a Novel - Layer 4
Writing a Novel - Layer 5
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Writing a Novel - Layer 8

Writing a Novel in Layers

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Tips for New Authors: Why You Need to Track Three Timelines

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Tracking the Threads: Why Your Mystery Draft Needs Three Timelines

Writing a mystery is like building a clock. While the reader only sees the hands moving steadily forward, the internal gears—the secrets, the motives, and the hidden history—must mesh perfectly for the story to "tell time" accurately.

When you are in the thick of a first draft, it is easy to get lost in the prose. However, the secret to a bulletproof mystery isn't just a clever detective; it’s a rigorous organization of time. To keep your manuscript from collapsing under the weight of its own secrets, you need to manage three distinct timelines.


1. The Crime Timeline (The Hidden Reality)

This is the "Backstory" or "True History" of the event. It begins long before the first chapter and usually ends the moment the detective arrives on the scene.

  • What it tracks: Every move the killer made before, during, and immediately after the crime.

  • Why it matters: If the killer was at the hardware store buying rope at 4:00 PM, they cannot have been seen at the gala at 4:15 PM across town.

  • The Draft Benefit: By mapping this out, you ensure that the "truth" remains fixed. Even if your detective is confused, you never are. This prevents the dreaded "plot hole" where a culprit’s alibi is physically impossible.

2. The Novel Timeline (The Reader’s Journey)

This is the linear progression of the book, starting from page one. It follows your protagonist as they navigate the investigation.

  • What it tracks: When clues are discovered, when witnesses are interviewed, and the passage of days or hours within the narrative.

  • Why it matters: Mystery readers are notoriously observant. If your protagonist spends three days investigating but it’s still Monday in Chapter 10, the immersion breaks.

  • The Draft Benefit: Keeping a log of the Novel Timeline helps you control the pacing. If you notice five chapters have passed in a single afternoon, you might need to pick up the tempo or introduce a "timer" (like a ticking clock element) to raise the stakes.

3. The Subplot Timeline (The Human Element)

A mystery novel isn't just a logic puzzle; it’s a story about people. This timeline tracks everything that isn’t the murder—romance, personal growth, professional conflict, or side-mysteries.

  • What it tracks: The evolution of relationships and personal stakes.

  • Why it matters: Subplots provide the emotional "breather" between intense interrogation scenes. However, they can’t just vanish. If a detective has a blow-up fight with their partner in Chapter 4, they shouldn't be acting perfectly happy in Chapter 5 without a resolution.

  • The Draft Benefit: Tracking subplots ensures they are woven into the main mystery rather than feeling like "filler." It helps you time the emotional beats so they hit right when the main plot needs a shift in energy.


Pro-Tips for Managing the Chaos

The "X-Ray" Spreadsheet: Many authors use a simple table or spreadsheet. Column A is the Date/Time, Column B is the "Crime Fact," Column C is the "Novel Action," and Column D is the "Subplot Status."

  • Color Code Your Notes: Use red for the crime, blue for the investigation, and green for subplots.

  • Sync the Weather: It sounds small, but if it's raining in your crime timeline, it must be raining (or the ground must be wet) when your detective arrives in the novel timeline.

  • The Reveal Check: Use your timelines to see exactly when the reader "knows" something versus when the detective knows it.

Final Thoughts

Writing the first draft is about getting the story down and not much else.  So this timeline tracking doesn't start until you have finished the first draft.  The first draft is merely blurting out the story.  You don't even have your writer's hat on yet.  You are only the story engineer and location scout at this point.

But once the story now exists, it's time to begin to track the three significant timelines!

Happy sleuthing!

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From Story Engineer to Author

From Engineer to Author: The Many Hats of a First Draft

The biggest hurdle for new writers isn't a lack of ideas; it’s the pressure to be an "Author" too soon. If you sit down at a blank page expecting to produce polished, rhythmic prose on your first try, you’ll likely stall before Chapter Two.

The secret to finishing a novel is realizing that "Author" is actually the very last hat you’ll wear. To get to the finish line, you need to cycle through a whole wardrobe of different roles first.


1. The Story Engineer (Brainstorming)

Before the first sentence is written, you are an Engineer. You aren't worried about the beauty of the bridge; you’re worried about whether it can hold weight. During brainstorming, your job is to stress-test your concept. Does the plot have enough tension? Is the protagonist’s motivation strong enough to power 300 pages? You are building the foundation.

2. The Location Scout (Setting the Scene)

Next, you become the Location Scout. Writers often forget that a setting is more than just a backdrop—it’s a silent character. You must decide where your scenes take place and how those environments "speak." A tense conversation feels different in a crowded elevator than it does in a vast, empty cathedral. Scout your locations and make sure they are working for your story.

3. The Investigator (The Crime Skeleton)

sherlock-holmes-graphicIf you are writing a mystery or a thriller, it’s time to put on your Investigator’s hat.  You are working backward, looking at the "crime" and deconstructing it. You need to know exactly how the deed was done before you can hide the truth from your readers.

It's important to pick clues that wll point to no one or everyone in the beginning.  It's important to know what will give rise to each suspect.  This is all part of the spine of the story.

Often, this stage will look like a maze, with each suspect dead-ending at a different point, until only the True Culprit is revealed.

4. The Producer & Director (Plotting & Pacing)

Once you have the skeleton, you become the Producer. This is where you organize the elements. Where will the clues drop? Who will they point to? As the Director, you decide the "camera angles" of each scene—whose perspective we follow and how the information is revealed to the audience.

5. The Town Crier (The Rough Draft)

This is the most critical phase. Now, you put on your Town Crier hat. Your only job is to blurt out the story as fast as you can.

  • Ignore the Grammar: The Town Crier doesn't care about commas.

  • Forget the Spelling: If you know what the word meant, move on.

  • Don't Look Back: If you realize you changed a character's name in Chapter 4, don't go back to Chapter 1 to fix it. Just keep going.

You are simply shouting the story onto the paper. It will be messy, it might be loud, and it will definitely be "rough," but it will be done.


The Final Reveal: The Author

It is only when the draft is finished—when the "The End" is typed and you finally sit back to review the context of the entire journey—that you finally put on your Author hat.

Now, you can worry about the cadence of the sentences, the perfect metaphors, and the correct verb tenses. You can’t "author" a vacuum. You can only author a story that actually exists.

The goal of a first draft isn't to be good; it's to be finished. Keep writing, stay in character, and don't let the Author in the room until the Town Crier has finished his job.

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New Release - Free Download

John Walsh is a successful funeral director with a loving family but he has a weakness for other women. The modern world thinks cheating is a victimless crime, but is it?

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Read Book Samples

Click on the graphic of my books and you will be brought to a page on my website where you can read a sample of my books in your browser.  It's much easier than downloading samples from Amazon.

Check back often as I give away books all the time.

Draft – Rebrand of a Vampire Book Series – Part 2 overnew

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PART 1 - WHY?

  • Are you freshening up your book or series?
  • Do you want to change the marketing approach?
  • Share you story about Newport Vampire Stories
  • Be sure you want a rebrand or a facelift and not an actual 2nd Edition because a second edition is a whole different animal.

PART 2 - LAYING OUT THE STEPS

Go through your cheat sheet and list out all the things you wanted on hand.

  • Video of the three pages from Amazon.
  • Updated manuscripts, new covers, ASIN AND ISBN Numbers
  • File location of all the manuscripts & book covers
  • New Description headlines
  • New Full Descriptions
  • Paperback & Hardback sizes and specifications
  • 3 Categories and how to get there
  • 7 keywords - with bucket fillers
  • Kindle Select books and upping your price for 'added value'

PART 3 - UPDATING THE MANUSCRIPTS

  • Other Books by R Shannon
  • Questionnaire or email address for feedback.
  • Add 9% of another book at the end
  • Direct link to leave a review with Tiny URL if you want to do that

PART 4 - REDOING THE COVERS - BOOK BRANDING

  • Doing the Research
  • Keep an Info File - At least one
  • Publisher Rocket vs. Amazon BSL
  • Choosing your 3 categories and 7 keywords for each book in series
  • Expand your reach with the later books
  • As you review the books, look specifically for the graphics, colors, texts and motifs that link the books as a series.  Look at how any bundles are set up.
  • Notice headlines and any keywords used in the headlines
  • How other authors use reviews or series info to entice book lovers
  • Goal:  Choose 3 best categories and 7 keywords.
  • Secret of keywords area

THE UPLOAD:

  • Use the cheat sheet to upload the correct information and use the previewer.