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Learning to Write from Pulp Fiction

WHAT IS PULP FICTION?

Pulp Fiction become popular during the depression of the 1920s and 1930s.  Publishers at the time used a very cheap “pulp” paper in order to produce these short stories and magazines that cost about a quarter.  Yes, twenty-five cents!

During the depression, life was difficult and people didn’t want to struggle to make sense of what authors meant by long run on sentences.  They didn’t have the stomach or patience for prose.  During a depression, people are lucky they can concentrate at all.   They wanted escape and the publishers gave it to them in the form of pulp fiction.

Pulp magazines were filled with adventurous stories with hard-boiled detectives, larger-than-life heroes, space travelers.  There was no subtlety.  It was all straight-talking dialogue.  The plots were fantastical and melodramatic, but easy to follow and easy to read.



A QUICK HISTORY OF PULP FICTION:

In the late 1800s and early 1900s, classical literature was popular.  I would even refer to it as high-brow fiction.  Oscar Wilde, H G Wells, Jack London, Upton Sinclair, F. Scott Fitzgerald, Ernest Hemingway, William Faulkner.  These authors are known not only for their storytelling ability, but their prose, their wordsmithing.  This is what I consider ‘high-brow’.  Their books are not read-’em and toss-’em books.  They are written to read and contemplate, maybe even read again and again.

Agatha Christie was also a part of this list of popular authors at the time, but she may have influenced the pulp fiction genre more than any of the other authors.  Her multi-suspect mysteries were extremely popular

Pulp fiction’s prose was everyday tough talk.  There were clever phrases to read and re-read.  There was no deep concepts to contemplate.  It was mostly action, reaction and romance.   The plots were sensational, violent and maybe strange, but they were easy to read; perfect for people who are distracted and worried.

WHAT MAKES PULP FICTION DIFFERENT?

WHAT CAN NEW AUTHORS LEARN FROM READING PULP FICTION?

  • Reading pulp fiction can help new authors know the difference between believable action and over-the-top action.
  • It can help an author know the difference between writing emotions and over-the-top melodrama.
  • It can help an author know how to quickly introduce a character.
  • It can show a new writer how to quickly get to the point of a story and keep it lean and tight.
  • It can help an author learn how to handle the passage of time, and much more.

Because most of the pulp fiction is short, it can help an author to easily see how the pulp fiction writer handled foreshadowing, passage of time,  action scene descriptions, fight scenes, how much and how little back story is needed in a short story.  There is much more for a new author to learn from reading pulp fiction.



 

 

What Eleven Extra Pages Are Needed in a Published book?

This book is for beginners who are publishing their first or second novel and they are still a little skittish about what else goes into a book.  I’ll lay it out so you can easily follow the list and be confident that you’re not forgetting anything.  These page suggestions are taken from the publishing industry.  These are the pages that appear in a book published by a publishing house.

Often the pages before a book starts are referred to as “front matter”.  Pages 1 to 6 would be considered Front Matter.  The rest of the pages after the book is inserted are considered Back Matters.

PAGE 1:  A Title page with only the name of the Book.  The font is usually big enough for the title to stand alone.  It is usually centered on the page horizontally and vertically.

Page 2:  Either a blank page or a Books by Page.  If you have other books that are published, you can list them on this page.  The title should be something like “Other Books by AUTHOR NAME”.

Page 3:  A second Title Page, but this one will have the name of the book, and below it the name of the author.  Again, this is in larger font and it is centered vertically and horizontally on the page.

Page 4:  Copyright page.  I am not a lawyer so I can’t give you any information that is legally correct.  However, I can tell you that I cobbled together different verbiage that I found in other author books.  I made it long enough to cover my bases, but not too long.  Below is the verbiage that I used.



COPYRIGHT:
This book is a work of fiction. Names, characters, places, and incidents are the product of the author’s imagination or are used fictitiously. Any resemblance to actual events, locales, or persons, living or dead, is coincidental.
Copyright © 2024 by AUTHOR NAME
Forward copyright © 2024 by AUTHOR NAME
Preview of this book copyright © 2024 by AUTHOR NAME
All rights reserved. In accordance with the U.S. Copyright Act of 1976, the scanning, uploading, and electronic sharing of any part of this book without the permission of the publisher constitute unlawful piracy and theft of the author’s intellectual property. If you would like to use the material from the book (other than for review purposes), prior written permission must be obtained by contacting the publisher at AUTHOR’S EMAIL.
Thank you for your support of the author’s rights.
Then you can put the name of your publishing company, if you have one, otherwise, leave the rest of the page blank.

Page 5:  Table of Contents.  eBooks require links for chapter beginnings and Paperback and Hardcover require page numbers.

Page 6:  (If applicable) Any maps that you may be including in your book.

Page 7:  Next comes your book.

Page 8:  Note to Readers.

Dear Reader:

Thanks for giving your time  to read this story.  I hope you enjoyed it.

As a new fiction author, reviews are very helpful to me. If you enjoyed this novel, I’d be so grateful if you would leave a review on Amazon.com. Here is a direct link:  (Add link to the review for this book).

[In order to create a review link, you will need the ASIN number of your book.  Then swap out your ASIN Number or ISBN number for the X’s in the link below:

https://www.amazon.com/review/create-review?&asin=XXXXXXXX]

I love to hear any feedback about the book and enjoy interacting with my readers, so please feel free to email me at AUTHOR EMAIL

Thanks again!
AUTHOR NAME OR SIGNATURE

Page 9:  What’s Next on your Reading List?

Verbiage:  Below is a chapter or two of my next book (or the next book in a series) for you to sample.  I hope you enjoy it.

Then insert up to 9% of the next book.  I keep it under 10% in case you are in Kindle Select.  They allow up to 10%, but I like to keep it on the lower side.

Page 10:  About the Author:  Add a biography of yourself.  Be sure to add a contact email as well as a little personal information.

Page 11:  Acknowledgements:  This page can go here or in the beginning of the book.  You can put it in lieu of “Other Books By Page.”  If you do use the Acknowledgements in the beginning of the book, then you can add the Other Books By Page here at Page 11.



 

 

 

Book Launch – Links for Marketing Stacking – 2024

When I self-published my first novel, I finished it and uploaded it and waited.  That’s when I learned how important marketing the book is.  I also learned through the next several books how important it is to take advantage of each tiny phase of a book launch for marketing.  That’s what this blog post is about.

I have made a checklist for beginners so you can print it out and have it with you when it’s time to launch your first book, or a subsequent book.  I believe it will be very helpful to you.

THE VIDEO ABOUT THE BOOK LAUNCH CHECKLIST:

Aside from the checklist, I have made a strategy video where I go over the checklist and give you an overview of how the launch happens, what is involved and how to set yourself up for the best outcome.  I consider a good outcome to be a smooth and timely launch, and within a week to 10 days, you have at least four to ten nice reviews.  It sounds easy, but for new authors, it’s not — But it is possible.



NEWSLETTER PROMOTIONS:

The following websites are ones where you build a email list and your books will be featured on these websites.  Bookfunnel and Siteorigin both offer “author swaps” where you can swap your featured book with another author who has a sizable list.

I’m not a seasoned marketer and don’t even consider myself that good at it, and even I was able to build an email list of 5,076 emails within a two year period.  To me, this is amazing!

Bookfunnel.com
Siteoriginapp.com
Instafreebies.com

AMAZON MARKETING STRATEGIES:

Amazon ads is a very complicated program to learn.  I only touched on the ad strategy in this checklist video.  There will be more Amazon ad videos coming in the future.

Below I have left a list of book marketing websites that as a beginner I used.  Now that I have built a newsletter, have a website, and post regularly to social media. I rely mostly on purchased ads with FreeBooksy, BargainBooksy, FussyLibrarian and purchased Amazon Ads.  But you may find the following links helpful so I’ll leave them for you to try out.

ADDITIONAL MARKETING WEBSITES



Microsoft Fonts for Books and Book Covers

Which font should you use when self-publishing?  The more choices we have, the harder it gets to choose.

I always chose Times New Roman as that was the font default in journalism, for books and newspapers for my entire life.  However, since Microsoft added hundreds of fonts, I now see any number of fonts show up.

Below are the most common fonts in my opinion:

As you can see from the picture above,  even fonts of the same size are heavier and lighter than each other and even the numbers are larger and smaller.  My favorites are Times New Roman and Trebuchet MS.

BOOK COVER FONTS – Pretty Fonts:

When it comes to Book Cover fonts, that’s another story.  You want something that is attention capturing.  I have gone through all of the fonts in Microsoft Word and below I have created a large list of the ones that would be appropriate for book covers.

Often you may want to also have fonts that are heavy and bold.  I again went through all the fonts and made a table with those fonts too.  I also added some old fashioned and vampire-like fonts.

I remember being new and overwhelmed while planning my first book cover.  There were too many choices and I was trying to find the best fonts to “fit in” with other authors.  In the beginning, this was very important to me.

I hope this helps.



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MYSTERY NOVEL BRAINSTORMING FOR BEGINNERS

THE BEST TIP I CAN PASS ON TO BEGINNER WRITERS:

bite-sized piecesWriting a novel is a huge undertaking.  There are many things that go into the writing of a fiction story.  The best tip I can pass on is this:  Break everything down into little bite-sized pieces.  By doing this, you can reduce a huge project down to do-able portions that can be done whether you have 2 hours a week to write or two full days!  It only requires a little planning and organization.

ALL NOVELS REQUIRE SOME SUSPENSE:

Regardless of what type of novel you choose to write, all stories require at least a semblance of suspense.  Suspense is what hooks the reader into the story, and it is what pulls the reader along the story and keeps them reading.  Suspense creates a question the reader desires an answer to.  The greater the suspense, the more hooked the reader will be.  

READING OTHER AUTHORS:

bite-sized piecesIt’s important to keep reading as your own journey as a writer continues.  Each author has a different style and uses different storytelling techniques.  The stories don’t even have to be great.  You can learn from the good, the bad and the bland.  Just analyzing what made a book bland is a great lesson in itself.  Did the story need more action?  Did the story get stuck somewhere? 

When I read novels now,  I can usually tell whether the author is a pantser or a plotter.  If the story sags in the third section, I can tell the author got caught in part two of the three-act structure. 

The books I read now are twice as enjoyable because I experience them as a reader but as an author too.  I get to enjoy the story itself but also watch and learn the author’s storytelling techniques too.  

WATCHING MOVIES FOR INSPIRATION:

When I am in the process of writing my own novels, I tend to read less because I’m reading and proofreading my own pages.  During these times, I like to vegetate by getting lost in a movie.  I watch movies specifically to learn from them.  Believe me, you can learn a lot about the actual storytelling craft from watching movies.  They can also be a source of inspiration for your own stories.  

It took me almost a year to come up with my first story for a novel.  One full year.  I didn’t know where to start.  I had ideas, but didn’t know how to brainstorm them into a potential story.  

WHERE CAN DO YOU GET IDEAS FOR A FICTION STORY FROM?

Ideas for stories in the beginning will come from TV movies, Cinema movies film list of the 1940sor other books you read.  Reading other authors is crucial no matter where you are on the writing spectrum.  However, when you’re new, you can learn a lot from watching mystery or crime noir movies.  I like movies from the 1940s, 1950s, and 1960s.  The movies in these decades didn’t have CGI and the directors had to use the stage to tell the story.  They used wider shots and props to assist the storytelling.  By watching these older movies, you can learn a lot regarding writing.  

The movies of today show the location scenes once and then do close up shots of one character talking and then follow it up with another close-up shot of a character talking.  There’s not that much to learn about storytelling from these movies.  It’s a shame because the sets are absolutely gorgeous, especially in the fantasy movies.  

To the left (or above) is a screenshot of the Wikipedia page that comes up when you search “1940 in film”.  This will give you all of the films and a tiny synopsis of what the films are about.  You can pick whatever decade appeals to you.

READ THE SYNOPSIS FOR THE MOVIE FIRST:

read-the-synopsisIt’s a good idea to read the synopsis before you view the movie.  Knowing at least a basic outline of the story will allow you to absorb more as an author.  If you go into the movie  blindly, you will be “experiencing the movie” as a viewer only.  By knowing ahead of time what story will be unfolding, it will allow you to watch specifically for certain scenes to unfold.  You can watch what tools are used to move the story along.   

For example:  Notice in the scenes how much information is passing to the viewer by the setting.  Besides the timeline of when the story is taking place, it often will give you shots of recognizable icons from certain cities.  There are so many techniques you can learn from watching these older movies about all of the tools used to lay out the facts of the story and how suspense is created.  Below is a list of things to watch for in stories:

  1.  How does the movie show the location of the story?  Do they use icons, or text on the screen?  Do they use snippets of dialogue?  Each movie you will learn different tricks for showing time and location.  
  2. How does the story show either poverty or opulence?
  3. How does the movie present the premise?  There will be at least dialogue about what the main character wants or needs.  Notice how this is done. 
  4. Notice where the suspense of the story starts.  Even in non-mystery stories, there will be at least a thread of suspense.  It might be suggested by a vision that one character and the viewer see and no one else does.  Or it may be a little gossip that passes in a short conversation.  
  5. Notice how the passage of time is handled.  Is the passage of a few years spoken in dialogue or is it projected in some other way?
  6. Notice how the writers show the character’s weakness or fallen nature.  
  7. Notice the change in locations in the story.  This is often how the story is kept moving forward.
  8. Notice when the suspense gets stronger.  
  9. Watch for how the writers will use lies to create a sense of worry or dread.
  10. For any twists in the story, notice how abrupt it happens.  Also take the time to notice if this was foreshadowed in the beginning of the story.  Readers love foreshadowing.  

MY SUGGESTION FOR A MOVIE:

Rebecca-movie-posterIf you are looking for a suggestion, I would suggest Rebecca for the first movie.  This movie was directed by Alfred Hitchcock and it has a lot of gothic atmosphere.  There is also a psychological plotline in this story so it is a goldmine for learning storytelling tools.  

Most of the synopses on Wikipedia give you an outline of the story but they don’t have spoilers in them.  Sometimes I only read about six paragraphs on the really long ones because the purpose is only to know a little bit about what the story will be about so you can watch for how things are handled on film.  You can easily translate any of these tools to novel writing.  

GOTHIC MOVIES:  Gothic movies are great at showing how to introduce fear and suspense into a story.  They are also a great place to learn how to use the atmosphere and the location and backdrops to add to the suspense.

FILM NOIR:  These movies are great to learn character development.  Film Noir is usually about all fallen characters.  In other words, they are all sinners, but some characters are bigger sinners than others.  This is a great way to learn how to craft a fallen

LONG SERIES:  These are great to learn about how the location and things in the room or backdrop help to relay the story.  You can learn a lot about the passage of time, how flashbacks are handled, how to introduce new characters in preparation to take the story in a new direction.  Miniseries like Downton Abbey and other miniseries are a great place to learn about what is going on.  

MELODRAMA:  Melodrama has fallen out of favor in recent times, but I personally think it needs a comeback.  You can learn about melodrama from old world soap operas.  I think the only one I can think of is Dallas.  It’s on either Amazon Prime or somewhere else you can watch it.  These types of shows are good for showing how to blend romance, cheating, and other emotional scenes into the story. 

You don’t have to commit to watching the entire soap opera.  You can learn a lot about storytelling tools by watching only a few shows.  

Blow is a copy of the entire Brainwashing Sheet I referred to above.  You can read the blog post about how to use it here.  

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Organizing Writing Projects Workflow – Part 2

WHERE WE LEFT OFF IN PART 1:

Video-Panel-Calendar-with-time-entriesIn the last installment, I described how to start your duties and obligations list with realistic times associated with each one.  The list will prove itself over a week or so.  Then you will be ready to expand on that list and make a series of workflows, templates, and procedure lists or diagrams.  I have posted my own above to jog your memory as to where we left off.

HOW TO RECLAIM TIME:

First let's talk about strategies for finding, making and clawing back time from your days that may be wasted right now.

  • Looking at your list, are there any obligations that you can take care of while waiting for  other things in your life?  For example:  Can you make some calls as you wait in line to pick up kids at school?
  • Can you save yourself a trip out of the house by hooking two or three errands together on the same day?
  • If you are spending your lunch breaks listening to coworkers blathering on and on about inane things, can you write during your lunch hour?  Or can you run an errand to clear a Saturday for a greater goal?
  • Can you listen to an instructional video while driving home from work or some other obligation to make better use of time in traffic?
  • Go through the list and see how you can mop up wasted time out of your days and reclaim that time for more or better things.
  • If you have 10 minutes here and 20 minutes there, don't waste it.  Clean out your purse with the 10 minute time slot.  Do online research for that 20 minutes.

Every minute that you make better use of will free your schedule for the higher goals you want to pursue.  Will your life suffer if you miss out on office gossip at lunchtime?  I doubt it.

A SPECIAL NOTE ABOUT GETTING LOST IN SOCIAL MEDIA:

Social media can be wonderful or it can be a time-wasting trap like none other. Be particularly careful with short videos or reels.  This can be  mindless and mind-numbing.  One short video can lead to the next almost without willing it.  We've all been there.  Think of the times the internet, in whatever form, has stolen an entire morning or afternoon.  In order to reach higher levels of accomplishment, this has to stop.

Assign yourself some mind-numbing social media time  at night.  You will have already met your daily accomplishment goals.  By checking social media in the evenings, the news of the day has had time to ferment.  You'll be reading news instead of 'breaking gossip' or hours of speculation.  You can see what your favorite social media people  have said all day instead of in the last hour.

If you must go on social media during the day, set an alarm to sound in fifteen minutes.  Then get back into accomplishment mode.



START THE WORK FLOW FROM THE TOP:

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As a self-publisher, all of the hats I wear in writing and publishing books are noted in the chart above.  Analyze and translate your business and make a similar chart.  As we move along, we'll drill down into each section and make work-flow diagrams, procedural lists, or informational sheets for just about everything that has to be done.

EVERY BUSINESS OR WORKFLOW NEEDS A FILING SYSTEM:

As you begin, it's important to know how you will organize and file the work product you are about to produce.  For example:  How will you file your book manuscripts so you can put your fingers on them in two seconds?  How will you file all the marketing graphics you produce once you create a social media presence?  How will you file and store video files that may be too big to store on a laptop or a desktop?

It's a good idea to think about this in your analyzing phase.  Below, I'll go into details about how I set up my book files to keep everything orderly and consistent.

STARTING AT THE TOP OF THE HIERARCHY:

Below is a snapshot of the top layer of my Self-Publishing Business.  Each area represents another hat I wear in publishing my novels -- or any other books I may decide to publish.  I created this mindmap on a free tool called Freemind.  What I like about this mindmapping software is that I can close each of the sections and only focus on what I need depending upon which segment of the self-publishing process I am in.

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ORGANIZING MY BOOK FILES | MANUSCRIPTS & COVERS:

Book-file-hierarchy-diagram

Above is the Book Files Hierarchy opened.  It contains a list of all of the folders, sub-folders and files I need for each of my books.  By having this visual, I can be consistent in the names of the folders,  It's even possible to set up the folders before you even finish a first draft.

When I wrote my first novel, I can't tell you how many "drafts" I had and how mixed up I got with it all.  This system makes everything clear and self-explanatory.



SELF-PUBLISHING ROADMAP:

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Above is the Self-Publishing Roadmap section opened.  This is more of a chronological list of everything that has to be done.  I have Procedural Lists and/or Informational Sheets with more detailed instructions for each of these steps.  It seems a bit excessive, right?  Not really.  By using organizational tools, diagrams, and lists, it prevents me from having to reinvent the wheel each time I have to do something.   I also don't have to use valuable mental energy 'figuring things out'.

There are many things I do on autopilot and I don't use a list for those things.  Anything I do everyday or once a week, I don't need a list for.  The lists come in handy when I'm doing something I only do occasionally.   I believe by having these lists, I cut through any confusion or a bad memory.  I have more energy to write!

LET'S LOOK AT THE PROOFREADING LIST:

Scroll-Page-Proofreading

Above is a snapshot of the Proofreading tab opened.  It has a chronological list of how I proofread.  I proofread in layers because it makes it easier and less taxing.

LET'S OPEN THE FORMATTING TAB:

Scroll-Page-Formatting

Above is the Formatting Tab opened up.  It too has a chronological list of how I take my books from formatting the eBook, making the ePub for best upload on Amazon, to the paperback and Hardcover.

If ever I'm at a loss as to what comes next, no matter where I am in the self-publishing process, I just have to go to my list, and the next step will become as clear as day.



Below I have a short snippet where I open all of the sub categories and you can see the chronological lists that serve as guides and reminders of what every facet of the process requires.

INFORMATIONAL SHEETS | PROCEDURE LISTS | DIAGRAMS:

In creating workflow information for the entire self-publishing process, I use a series of Informational Sheets, Procedure Lists, and Diagrams.  They all serve the same purpose:  To make sure I know what is needed, it functions as a memory jogger, and gives me a sense of knowing I'm not forgetting anything.

Below is a Video Snippet showing one my Informational Sheet on Formatting.  I have been adding information and specific notes about experiences I've had with formatting for the last several years.  I check this list before beginning any formatting so I refresh my memory about any little snags that happened in the past.  This is a great time saver.

Below is a video snippet scrolling through the Formatting Info Sheet.

In the next installment, I will cover my Blog and Video Procedural List.  This allows me to easily write a blog, convert it to a video script, and make blog graphics and video overlay panels at the same time.  Multitasking supercharged!  See you in the next installment!



Writing Fiction or Memoirs With a Purpose

IT'S IMPORTANT TO KNOW WHY YOU WANT TO WRITE.

EWords-Writing-with-a-Purposeveryone writes for a reason.  Knowing why you write is important, especially as a beginner writer.  Writing a book is not hard, but it can be a long process.   If your purpose for writing is clear, this will give you the energy and inspiration to spur you on if and/or when the going gets a little tough.

Are you writing for pleasure?  Are you an avid reader and you want to write the books you never found?  Do you want to write around some social commentary you have a desire to share?  Writing is a form of sharing.  What is it that you want to share?  Your wit?  Maybe Satire? Have you always been told that you're funny?   Do you have a unique take on society that you think people would like?

I love stories and movies that have a backdrop of Catholicism in them, like The Godfather saga, or The Supranos, or even Ray Donovan.  The Catholicism in these stories felt familiar to me and I believe it gave the story a layer of depth as it tapped into religion and culture which tends to anchor a group or family.  So I write novels that have either a backdrop of Catholicism or a ribbon of Catholic sensibility passing through it.  Of course, I leave out the blasphemy that Hollywood loves to toss in there on occasion!

I also write as part of my legacy.  I began to write in 2018 when I moved to Central Florida, which I considered my pre-retirement.  Now I have retired and I write full time.  I feel that my books will be part of my legacy.  I'm clear on my purpose for writing.

ARE STORIES JUST BURSTING TO COME OUT OF YOUR HEAD?

Some people are what I call natural-born writers.  They do have stories bursting out of their hearts and heads.  Often, these people fell in love with reading as children.  Reading was an adventure.  It took them up, up and away.  Some people have always had a desire to author their own stories.  If this sounds like you, you are a natural-born author.

This is usually a sign that you have been given the gift of authoring.  These gifts are Heaven-sent, and predate schooling and other influences in your life.  If this is the case, embracing your fate is probably the next best step to take.

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DO YOU WANT TO WRITE AS PART OF YOUR LEGACY?

There are trades and arts that seem to fall by the wayside in each generation.  But often, how to do certain things is lost to history.  Do you know how to do something that you feel you need to leave behind?  Do you want to write about how you did something that is now fading from the world?

There are young people who don't know how to write a check anymore.  They don't know how to address an envelope for the mail.  Some don't even read cursive writing anymore.

Listening to a lecture by the learned intellectual and researcher Thomas Sowell, he stated that when Rome fell, the western world lost the art of making bricks.  Then when the western world got back on its feet, they had to import brings from England because the art of making bricks died with the civilization.  Cement was invented in Rome.  They made all of those brick arches -- but the art was lost.  What is it that you know how to do that you feel compelled to record for prosperity's sake?

I'm old enough to remember 'phone guys' that worked for Bell South or whatever the phone company was called back then.  These men -- they didn't have phone women back then -- would show up with big toolbelts and gaffs or lineworker boots on.  These boots had cleats or little metal spikes in them that was a safety feature.  These men know everything about the phone system.  They would climb the wooden telephone poles and they could fix phones outside on the pole or inside in the houses.  They were familiar with the entire system.   That is one group of technical workers that have fallen away.

Is there something about an art form or a job that you knew that you want to pass on for prosperity sake?  You can write a novel around it and it will serve two purposes:  It will be a way for you to tell the story of your industry or job and you will be documenting how life was at a certain time in history.



DO YOU HAVE A BURNING DESIRE TO SHARE A UNIQUE EXPERIENCE?

Author signing autograph in own book at wooden table on white planks backgroundVery often life dishes out some hard times to some of us.  Did you experience, survive and prosper through some difficult times that you feel compelled to write a memoir about?  You don't have to have been a famous celebrity or someone with a Moses-like mission.  You may have fell on hard times and you want to share your experience, strength or faith that kept you going.  People love inspirational stories.

Writing a memoir can also be part of your legacy.  Someone three generations down the road may be curious about how the family was back in your times.  By having a published memoir, you can share your perspective on things during the times you lived.

Today people no longer write letters.  Most photos live on phones that may be lost or stolen.  Even photos in the cloud could easily be lost to history without the right username and password.  By writing a memoir, you may be someone who is documenting the present in a way that historians in the future may be very grateful for.

SO WHY DO YOU WANT TO WRITE A BOOK?

What do you think?  Do any of these reasons resonate with you?  Make your first writing assignment to list the reason or reasons why you choose to write.

Here is a video where I had a few more words to say about finding your reason to write!



How to Write a Book Series

I ACCIDENTALLY WROTE MY FIRST BOOK SERIES:

AllBookSeriesI didn’t set off to write a book series.  How did it happen?  My first novel turned out to be way too long and there was way too much going on.  So I broke it down and wrote two separate stories.

Once I finished the first two novels, I realized that because my main character was a private investigator, it was possible to continue to solve crimes in new books, so that's what I did.  The series is now four books, but I could easily add more in the future.

During the process of writing my first, second and third series, I learned a lot of tips to make it easier.  There were so many things I didn't know I didn't know in the beginning.  My purpose in this blog post is to pass on my best tips in writing a book series.

I found out later that more experienced authors even suggested that newer authors consider writing in series because it's easier to market the books.  But my venture into writing book series was a happy accident.

TIP NUMBER 1:  KEEP A LONG RUNNING INFORMATION LIST

Keep a long running names list.  I call mine an Information Sheet.  I put down every character I ever name.  I learned the hard way to only trust my memory.  It doesn't work!

By having a long list of every character, street names, crime locations, neighbor names, job titles, etc., you will have all of this information at your fingertips.

Example Number 1:  In my first novel in the Jack Nolan Detective Series, I needed an immediate boss' name.  So I chose Lieutenant Duane White.  But then when I needed to refer to him in Book 3 but I forgot what I named him!  I had to hunt him down in the manuscript of the first book.  This can take hours, especially if you don't have any clue what you may have called him.

Now I keep the all proper names and other information that I may need again on a long list that travels with me through each book.  No matter how insignificant the character seems, I write it down on my information list.

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Example Number 2:  I referred to Jack Nolan's wife, one of the characters, as having left him eight month's previous to the start of the series.  By having this information recorded, I was able to track how many months passed and how this time increased over the time of the series.

Example Number 3:  Town names, Plaza names, Mall names, etc.  All of these seem insignificant when you are pulling the names out of the air during the drafting of the book.  But with cops working in the same town, you may need to reference that same mall again.

Special Note to Fantasy Writers:  They use what they sometimes call  a World Bible, and this is a more extended information list.  It's important to keep track of everything I've just mentioned, as well as the world rules and the rules regarding whatever supernatural power you may write about.



TIP NUMBER 2:  KEEP A SHARED MARKETING LIST FOR THE ENTIRE SERIES:

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shared-marketing-list

Keep all of information about the books on one shared marketing sheet.  I keep the names, publication dates, book links, categories, and keywords for the books all on one page.

Once you begin to market the books, you will need to use this information over and over again.

You may also want to keep a few short blurbs because when uploading to advertise on Bookfunnel, Bookbub, FussyLibrarian, or Freebooksy, you will need all of this information handy.

At the time of the writing of this blog post, Amazon only allow an author to put their book in 3 genres.  If you have 4 books in a series, you can put the last three books in different genres thereby extending your marketing reach.

It goes without saying that you should have a link in the back of each eBook so the reader can click on the link and go to purchase the next book inthe series.

Amazon only allows seven keywords for each book.  Use the best keywords for the first book or two.  Then use longer-tail keywords and different keywords to broaden your reach for new readers.  By having them handy, especially if you do keyword research, it will make all of this much easier.

Let me give you an example: In my Jack Nolan Detective Series, I put the first book into Police Procedurals, Mystery Romance, and Mystery Suspense. But Books 2 to 5, I can add into general mystery categories and  women's fiction, literature and fiction, etc.  You can imagine how much broader your reach for new readers will be.

TIP NUMBER 3:  USE A BROAD STROKE CHARACTER ARC OVER THE ENTIRE SERIES:

character arc graphicI use broad-stroke character arc for the main characters that extends over all the books in the series.  Each individual book, however, the character grows and changes a little bit.  So each book contains its own arc, but there is a longer series arc for the main characters.  It helps to know this before you start writing the series.

Each book has a crime or mystery that plays out and is solved.  The characters grow during the subplot of each book.  Once the mystery is solved, a new normal is shown with the characters embracing their new-found growth.   In the next book, the same template will be followed.  The mystery or crime will play out or be solved, and characters will grow, and there will be a new normal that reflects that growth.

 TIP NUMBER 4:  I WRITE THE BOOKS AS STAND-ALONE BOOKS

This tip is about writing the books in the series as 'stand-alone books'.  This allows me to market the books as a series, but also as stand-alone books.  As stated above, each book has a full plot that completes but I put in enough background information in order to fill in stand-alone readers on what is going on with the characters in case they haven't read the initial books.

I write in Scrivener and I set up a meta tag so I can keep track of what background information I need to drop into the story for those stand-alone readers.  This makes marketing the books much easier.

Where to Find Beta Readers

WHERE TO FIND BETA READERS
DEPENDS ON TWO THINGS:

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Some writers have no-to-little money to work with and they will take one route. Other writers have no time but have some money to work with. Where you are on this road will determine what your choices are.

I HAVE TIME BUT NO MONEY:

beta-reader-ideasThis could be a person who works full time, lives alone, or has a few kids and there is just not enough extra money around to fund all the things necessary to do when self-publishing a book.  Not to worry. There are a few choices for you.

Goodreads.com is an active website for readers and authors and is filled with other authors who are also looking for help to publish their books. The trick is to find them.

If you search "Beta Readers" in the search box on Goodreads, it will bring up all of the beta reader groups that are available to you at that time.  You can access this under the community tab on the navigation menu. Be sure to read the rules and regulations for the specific group because the last time I looked, there were a few Gestapo-like warnings and instructionals about  how people should post.

If you happen to be extraverted or bubbly, good with people, you will have no trouble finding someone in one of these groups or forums to help you. I'm introverted and don't do well in these large groups because I always feel like I'm bothering people.  But not everyone is like this, so if you are good at making acquaintances and friends, give Goodreads a try.

Try to google "beta readers" as well and you will find other forums that claim to have people willing to read your book.  I never gave this much patience because I chose to just pay someone.

TRY A FAMILY MEMBER AS A BETA READER:

If you have a family member who you can trust to give you honest feedback and gentle criticism, this is probably the best choice.  Make sure it's someone who will want to do a good job for you and they will know you are counting on them. That's what I did.  My Aunt Gen offered to read my books and I jumped at the chance. She read them and kept a notepad by her book and jotted down everything she thought about.

I also had a friend who needed computer help and I bartered with her for beta reading.  That was also a great experience.

The trick to making working with amateurs, so to speak, work is knowing two things.  (1) Your readers will feel that they have to give you some level of criticism so you have to be ready to make that work for you.  I'll go into that below.  (2)  The second thing is that sometimes people will give you advice about writing books that come out of left field.  They will not know what they are talking about, so it's important to be prepared for this.  Just be ready to thank them for their ideas.

Once you have chosen a family member or friend to beat read for you, you need to direct their attention to what it is you are interested in having them do. Tell them that after they read the book, you will want to know the following 5 things:

  1. Do you like the characters?
  2. Is the plot easy enough to follow or was it confusing at any point?
  3. Were there any plot holes or anything about the plot that felt unfinished?
  4. How were the character and location descriptions?
  5. Did my prose read easily or did you find yourself having to re-read sentences sometimes?

That's it.  Let them have the book with those questions.  Then after they're done, you can ask them other questions.  By guiding them as to what you want to know, you will get feedback and criticism that is helpful.





I HAVE MONEY BUT NOT TIME:

If you are working, raising kids, or just working 60 hours a week, you probably have a few extra dollars and will need to get someone two help you for a reasonable price.  There are full industries that have sprung up around the entire self-publishing industry, but it's important to know how not to be ripped off!

I used Fiverr.com for my beta readers.  I found someone who was willing to read my book and give me feedback.  The person I chose read the book in Microsoft Word and she used commenting in the Track Changes feature.  I hadn't thought of this myself at that point.  She commented all throughout the book.  This was so valuable because it was like being in the reader's head when she read the book.

I gave her my list of 5 questions above and between her answering the questions and commenting throughout the book, she did a great job.  She charged me $80.  This was back in 2022 so it may have gone up to $100, but I believe it's still worth it.

I have become a repeat Fiverr user as I have had nothing but good experiences on their website.

Here is a video you may like where I go over pretty much the same material I just explained in the blog post.

 

 

MYSTERY NOVEL BRAINSTORMING WORKSHEET

This worksheet is geared for those who want to write a mystery or crime novel.  Even those wanting to write literary fiction, you will need some level of mystery or suspense to keep readers hooked into your story.  Literary fiction is about character studies and life studies than technical mysteries, but every book needs at least some level of suspense or surprise every so often to keep a reader’s interest.  Even in a slice-of-life novel or a family saga, there needs to be something that is mysterious about the plotline.

THE PURPOSE OF THIS WORKSHEET:

cop examining ballistic reportWhen I first decided to write a novel, it took me one full year (I’m not kidding!) to even come up with a crime.  Today, using these methods I’m about to reveal, it only takes me two to three days to think up three or four mystery scenarios.

My wish is that this worksheet will help those beginners who don’t know where to start and are still trying to think of a good crime.

THE LISTS | CHOOSE FROM COLUMN A AND COLUMN B:

Below I have lists of crimes and also mystery genres.  This list is meant to jog your memory and get your creative juices flowing.  All of the crimes can be swapped into any genre.  The list at the bottom is of multiple genres, but this is not an exhaustive list by any means.  Just look at the categories on Amazon to get a feel for how many book genres there are today.

 



START THE WORKSHEET BY CHOOSING A CRIME OR MYSTERY:

mystery-novel-brainstorming-worksheet-pg1 Let’s talk about how to use this work sheet.  Choose a crime or mystery from the list below and make up a potential perpetrator.  Don’t waste time on what he or she looks like.  Then start asking the following questions:

  • Why would this person want to commit this crime?
  • What could be going on in his/her life that would make him/her feel they needed to commit this crime?
  • How would he want to cover his tracks?
  • What specific knowledge would a character need to pull off a crime or swindle like this? In other words, is he/she an accountant and that makes it easier to commit a financial crime?
  • Then ask: Who would need to help him or give him/her cover? Add necessary characters and think about a connection.  Is it a family connection?  Is it a romantic connection?

THE NEXT SET OF QUESTIONS TO ASK:

Once you have a perpetrator and the cast of necessary characters, then it’s time to answer the following questions:

  • What could go wrong in the commission of this crime that would create tension or mystery? (He drops a glove or a drop of blood.)
  • How will these clues ultimately lead to his/her exposure? (How will this clue be found?)
  • How can this end in a way that would let justice prevail? (How and who will find the clue?)
  • How will the culprit ultimately be caught? (Is he cornered by an accuser? Is he arrested?  Does he confess?)
  • What is one clue that can be minimized in the beginning of the story but will turn out to be the one who catches the bad guy?

NEXT SET OF QUESTIONS:

  • List the things that could go right for the perpetrator -- like a second, more-likely suspect pops up and suddenly all eyes are not on the real culprit anymore?
  • Could there be other likely suspects that would also have motivation to commit the crime?
  • As the story grows, add whatever crucial characters are needed (witnesses, husbands, wives, bosses, helpers, etc.) who you will need to make the crime and solving of the story happen.
  • If you get this far, it means that you have a viable storyline.

THE SKELETON OF THE CRIME:

skeleton of a crimeBefore you exert too much energy fleshing out any character or story details, be sure to check to make sure you can design a three-prong storyline out of this budding storyline.  One prong will be a red herring storyline, someone who may look guilty, but is exonerated in the middle or end of the story.  The second prong is a second suspect or a wrong suspect who will look guilty for a large segment of the storyline.  And the final prong will be for the real culprit.  In order to have a story that works, you will need a believable crime that can meld these three prongs into one suspenseful story.

As you use this worksheet and these techniques, a crime skeleton will emerge.  Some attempts at this will go flat in the early stages for any number of reasons.  But some storylines will begin to almost shape themselves.I always make four believable storylines and then choose the best one.  Then I know I have the best of my ability at that time in my life.  Once you know you have a storyline and a lineup of stick figures and character roles that can technically pull off the mystery, so to speak, then you can begin to build real characters and an actual story.



THE CHARACTERS BUILD THEMSELVES:

Once you know what will be needed for the three-pronged storyline and what traits the lead characters will need to play out their parts, the characters will start building themselves into two-dimensional characters.  You can take the characters up to deeper, three-dimensional characters as you flesh out your main story and subplots.

LIST OF MYSTERIES, CRIMES & GENRES

I hope this is helpful.  Once you know you have a workable storyline, then it’s time to take a look at my Ultimate Character Development Worksheet.  This will help you bring the stick figures to three-dimensional with a full character arc.

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