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WRITING EXERCISE YOU CAN DO WITH A SPOUSE

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CHANGE THE WAY YOU WATCH MOVIES:

Change-way-view-moviesTurning the viewing of a movie into a writing exercise will change the way in which you watch the movie.  For your spouse, it won't change anything.  Most people love to go into the story not knowing anything.  There are some who any hint of a spoiler will ruin the movie for them.  You may be one of them now!

However, in order to watch through a writer's eye, you will need to watch not only the unfolding story, but you want to know ahead of time what action will be playing out.  This way, you can watch for the subtleties.  In other words, you will be on the lookout for foreshadowing and tiny insignificant clues that are being dropped that will wind up being the clue that solves the mystery.

I started to watch movies in this way several months ago and I have to say it didn't ruin my movie watching, it has enhanced it greatly.  Knowing what will happen doesn't ruin a movie for me.  I have always been that way, but I get so much more out of the movies I watch with this technique, that I will continue to watch in this way.

So how does it work?

WATCHING A MOVIE WITH A PURPOSE:

DP-wikipedia-on-screenFind a summary of the movie on Wikipedia.  Most movies have a page about them and it gives all the technical information about who wrote the original story, the producer, director, stars, etc.   But there is a section entitled PLOT.  This is where the plot is laid out for you.

If you are scheduled to watch a horror movie, decide ahead of time what you will look for.  It's important to notice how the movies create a spooky atmosphere.  Is it done with fog or lighting?  Or maybe sounds of footsteps.  These will all come in handy if you write horror yourself.

If you are watching a mystery, watch how some clues are planted but made to seem insignificant.  This is slight of hand that is required in writing mysteries.  Seeing this play out in a movie will give you many ideas on hiding clues in your books.

For any movie, notice how much information is dropped in the beginning to set the stage.  Do they show a panorama of famous buildings to let you know you're in New York or Paris?  Do they show carts and horses to let you know you are going back into the 1800 or 1900s?  Notice how much information is conveyed with just the presence of certain props and locations.  Almost every scene is a lesson in itself.



WON'T KNOWING THE PLOT RUIN THINGS?

will-it-ruin-movieTo be honest, most plots are too long to even remember or put together with one reading.  I can usually follow the plotline for about the first four paragraphs.  After that, I can't remember who is who but it doesn't matter.  As long as you have a gist of an idea of what will take place, it allows you to watch for it.

You can see whether the drama plays out slowly or whether there is a jump scare to introduce a twist in the plot.  All of this is what you will feed on as an author.  You are getting an up-close look at how the script writer and the director have choreographed the telling of the tale.

WHY I CHOOSE THE OLD MOVIES:

I choose to watch old movies from the 1960s and 1970s because the method of shooting movies was different back then.  The directors tended to fill the scene and writing fiction requires you to 'fill the scene' too.  In modern movies, although they spend a fortune on sets, you see the set once in a while, but most scenes are one close-up of one star with a quick move to show a close up of another star.  It's not as rich for a writer.

EXAMPLE MOVIE:  THE GORGON

This is one of the Hammer Film Production movies that I have recently fell in love with.  They are old movies from the 1960s but so charming.  These are easy to follow as an author and you can learn a lot about adding suspense, atmosphere, how people show fear, methods of showing distrust.  These movies are short and shot on or in one set at a time, so there's a lot of action and background for you to pick up hundreds of tips.

You can even watch with a notebook and pen.  Jot down the things you see that would be helpful to you in your writing.  If you watch mystery movies with police work, you can write down the specific terms for things that come up over and over.  For example, the words having to do with arrest warrants or fingerprint evidence, etc.



A WRITING EXERCISE AFTER THE MOVIE:

CAPTURE A SCENE:  If you are watching on a computer, pause the movie in the middle of a great scene.  Take a screen shot of the scene for later.  If you're watching on a TV, pause and take a picture on your phone.

Icon-hand-writingWRITING EXERCISE:  Next time you are sitting down to write, pull up the picture and create a scene in your head -- not from the movie, but from your own imagination.  Using this setting as inspiration, think of something that is about to happen in the room or what just happened in the room.  Be sure to include a description of the room and/or the main elements in the room.  This exercise alone will improve your descriptive writing and could even lead to a short story!  You never know.

CONCLUSION:

  • Read the plotline -- at least three quarters of it so you can be on the lookout for all the techniques of storytelling.
  • Think ahead of all the information you will want to keep watch for.  Make either a mental note of all the techniques you see or write them down.
  • If you watch police procedurals and write them, jot down all the technical names for things so you have them at your fingertips when you are writing your own fiction.
  • Take a picture of a great setting in the movie for later.  Using that scene as inspiration, think up your own small plot for what is going to happen in this room, what could happen, or what just happened.  Be sure to describe the setting adding all of the emotions and/or mood elements you saw in the movie.

So that's it.  Follow me on social media and let me know if you like this method of watching movies to learn.



HOW TO IMPROVE YOUR WRITING WHILE WATCHING MOVIES

THIS IS AN EXERCISE IN IMPROVING YOUR NOVEL WRITING BY WATCHING OLDER MOVIES:

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Screen Shot from "The Gorgon"

I've been doing this exercise for about six months now and it has turned into my favorite way to experience movies.  This allows me to experience the movie as a normal viewer but also watch it with an author's third eye.

I choose to watch mostly movies from the 1960s to the late 1970s for a few reasons that I'll go into below:

OLD MOVIES VS. NEWER MOVIES:

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FIRST:  Classical Hollywood Style:  The old classic Hollywood style focused on clear storytelling, three-act structures, and a focus on character development.  The writers and directors infused their work with a fresh perspective, but there was a reliable style to the storytelling.  I believe this style is easier to learn from as a new author.

SECOND:   The Pace of the movie.  Modern films tend to have a faster pace, driven by shorter attention spans and the need to engage audiences immediately and constantly.  It's common to see the camera move back and forth shooting so fast you can't keep up.  As a writer, there's nothing to learn with this.

movie dialogueTHIRD:  Classic films relied more on dialogue, staging and backdrops to tell the story.  This is the richness that I find most helpful to see and learn from as an author.  Modern storytelling is worried about the 3-second attention span.  Older movies assumed the audience was grown up and could sit still and pay attention for a few minutes without intense stimulation.

FOURTH:  The older movies were 'agenda free'.  There wasn't any heavy-hand pushing politics or debauchery at every turn.  In my humble opinion, this ruins even the best of movies.

FIFTH:  Newer movies have upgraded post production technology and CGI, so they are now focused on movie effects, jump scares and gore shocks.  Although many of you may enjoy this type of thing, it really doesn't have much to teach a new author.

SIXTH:  Even though the costumers and set designers have come so far and their work is breathtaking, the gorgeous backdrops seem to be shown one or twice and the rest of the scenes are filled with quick close-up shots to showcase the facial acting.  Whereas, in the older movies, the directors would set up a whole room, have the actors roam through the room while acting.  They were constantly doing things, picking up a cigarette, or stoking a fire -- action that you can learn from.  This is the type of action that keeps fiction dialogue from being boring.  These small movements keep the scene real in the readers' minds.

SEVENTH:  There's nothing more irritating than the movies that were made with hand-held cameras and watching it is the equivalent of being on an unattended rollercoaster ride. There is a chaotic feel to the entire movie.  This was unthinkable in old Hollywood.  Again, you may like this type of film to watch and just enjoy, but there's nothing to be gained as an author from it.

WHICH MOVIES SHOULD I WATCH?

self-doubts-pictureEveryone has to find their own subgenres whether it be old gothic movies or old mystery movies.  But a good place to start is at Wikipedia.  Below are two links to the 1960s and 1970s in film.  Movies made in these years would fall into the categories I mentioned above.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/1960s_in_film
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/1970s_in_film

SO HOW DOES LEARNING FROM MOVIES AS A WRITER WORK?

DP-wikipedia-on-screenIt requires you to know ahead of time what will happen.  If you are the type that hates to know what will happen first, then watch the movie first to enjoy it as a viewer.  Then you can go onto the next section where I talk about the process:

Look up the movie on Wikipedia.  Most movies have a full pages with all the information about who wrote it, produced it, directed it and starred in it.  It also has a section called Plot.  Read the Plot before watching the movie.

Knowing the plot ahead of time doesn't ruin the movie for me because it allows me to watch the movie as a viewer but to also watch for how the writer and director choose to dramatize the action of the plot.  You will learn how they do foreshadowing, how they create red herrings, how they hide the true culprit.

You will also learn about tropes.  For example.  I've been watching Hammer Horror movies from the 1960s and they all have gothic settings.  Every gothic movie has the carriage and horses.  They all have the castles and fog.  THey all have the candelabras.  These are the tropes that readers and watchers want.  Some tropes never get old.

As the plot unfolds, you can see how it all comes together and how they placed and showcased the final clue or the comeuppance or the final chase, etc.  I find this so helpful in seeing the story elements handled by the script writers and the directors.

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TAKE THE EXPERIENCE ONE STEP FURTHER:

take it up a stepIf you are watching the movie on a computer, take a screen shot of a scene and then set up an imaginary happenstance that occurs in this setting.  Describe the setting in words, attempting to capture the essence of what you saw on film.  Doing this a few times will help you get better and better in describing backgrounds and scene settings.

This type of experience can even lead to an actual short story.  Just think up what type of problem could go wrong in this setting and take it from there.

10 Minute Exercise - Watch the first ten minutes of any movie or TV show to see how much background and personality info is dumped just by the background, music and setting. Every movie or show assumes viewers are starting out in the dark.  There is always a lot of good ideas in the first 10 minutes of a movie on how to convey information from background and props without dialogue or info dumping.

 



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Book Genres – Cozy Fantasy – Magical Realism – Historical Fantasy

In our last installment, we covered the top three book genres:  Urban,  Dark and Grim Dark Fantasy.  Now we will drill down into the Fantasy sub-genre categories.

As stated in previous installments on learning the various sub-genres, knowing all the categories and what makes them different from one another will help you either find the very books you love to read.  Or if you are an author, it will help you find the best genre to position your book in the marketplace.

And if you are looking to 'write to market' as some authors do, knowing the expectations and subtle differences between the various genres can help you zero in on what expectations your readership will have.

💥💥   COZY FANTASY  💥💥

Cozy Fantasy is a new sub-genre that was not a thing when bookstores were popular.   They are fantasy books but are lighter and less dark.  There's often murder and/or other mishaps, but the level of horror is non-existent.  Often the story is told with tongue in cheek or a whimsical narration.

Unlike Dark Fantasy or Grim Dark, the characters in a Cozy Fantasy may be flawed but they generally have good hearts.  There may be problems being wrestled with, but there is aren't any mean and wretched Charles Dickins like characters.  The stories have a general feeling of warmth.

Cozy fantasies are also low stakes stories with small-town charm.  There is more focus on interpersonal relationships than elaborate or complicated plotlines.  The stories often iinvolves magical elements but in a gentle, inviting or playful way.

They (almost) always have a happy and satisfying ending.  Law and order and goodness win the day.

A few classics that would fit under the category of Cozy Fantasy:

  • The Secret Garden by Frances Hodgson Burnett:  While primarily a children's book, it features elements of magic, healing, and a strong sense of community, aligning with Cozy Fantasy themes.
  • Little Women by Louisa May Alcott: This classic novel offers a warm and comforting story focused on family and personal growth, with a touch of magical realism in its depiction of dreams and aspirations.
  • The Guernsey Literary and Potato Peel Pie Society by Mary Ann Shaffer and Annie Barrows: This heartwarming tale of community and friendship, set in post-war Guernsey, evokes a cozy atmosphere and gentle magic.

💥💥   MAGICAL REALISM  💥💥

Magical Realism is a newer subgenre too.  Magical realism are low fantasy stories as they are rooted in our own world with only one or two fantastical elements -- usually at least one form of magic.   They take place in an often-recognizable place and the contemporary world.

Books written in the magical realism genre mix a fictional narrative with a little magic.  The elements of magic are often introduced into the story without explanation.  Characters often react to magical events with indifference or normalcy.

These stories are more realistic than fantasy and this is why often these books are also contained within the literature & fiction category as well.

Although the stories contain a little magic, the narratives are serious and the stories themselves are very realistic.  It is a blend of realistic narrative and fantastical elements often presenting them in a matter-of-fact manner.  They tend to blur the line between fantasy and reality, creating a sense of wonder and/or disorientation.

While Cozy Fantasy and Low Fantasy also blend magic and reality, Magical Realism is more focused on the unsettling or surreal aspect of the magical elements, often with a sense of underlying mystery or unease.

Three magical realism classics:

  • One Hundred Years of Solitude by Gabriel García Márquez: A seminal work of Magical Realism, this novel seamlessly blends fantastical elements into a realistic narrative, creating a rich and unforgettable world.
  • Like Water for Chocolate by Laura Esquivel: This popular novel combines magical realism with a coming-of-age story, exploring themes of love, loss, and family with a touch of the extraordinary.
  • Beloved by Toni Morrison: While primarily a historical novel, Morrison incorporates elements of magical realism, particularly in its depiction of Sethe's character and her relationship with her deceased daughter.

💥💥   HISTORICAL FANTASY  💥💥

Historical Fantasy blends historical fiction with fantastical elements, creating a narrative set in a specific historical period such as medieval Europe, ancient Rome, or the Victorian era, with magic, mythical creatures, or other supernatural elements.  It strives for historical accuracy as it weaves the magical elements and creatures throughout.

It differs from High Fantasy by grounding the story in a recognizable historical context.

Three classic Historical Fantasy books:

  • Jonathan Strange & Mr Norrell by Susanna Clarke: This novel is set in early 19th century England, a time when magic is believed to be lost. Two magicians emerge, bringing magic back into the world, but with unexpected consequences. This book masterfully intertwines historical events with magical realism.
  • The Once and Future King by T.H. White: Although often categorized as Arthurian legend, this retelling of the King Arthur story incorporates elements of fantasy and magic. The novel explores the life of Arthur from childhood to his reign, blending historical figures with mythical creatures and magical occurrences.
  • The Golem and the Jinni by Helene Wecker: This book takes place in late 19th century New York City. It follows the stories of a Golem, a creature of Jewish mythology, and a Jinni, a spirit from Arabian folklore, as they navigate the challenges of their new world. This novel beautifully blends historical fiction with magical realism.

💥💥   ROMANTASY  💥💥

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Romantasy is a blend of romance and fantasy genres, where the romantic relationship is as central to the plot as the fantastical elements. It often features strong female protagonists, complex love interests, and immersive fantasy worlds. Equal emphasis is placed on romance and fantasy; in other words, both elements are integral to the story, with neither taking a backseat.

These stories are similar to high or epic fantasy in that they can have a richly detailed fantasy world, but there is as much emphasis put onto the romance.  The romance is not just a subplot.

It can be a little harder to isolate three actual romantasy books as this genre is almost too new.  But I will list three classics that no one would argue with:

  • Wuthering Heights by Emily Brontë: While primarily a gothic romance, this novel incorporates supernatural elements and a passionate, tumultuous love story that echoes the intensity often found in romantasy.
  • Pride and Prejudice by Jane Austen: Though not overtly fantastical, Austen's wit and sharp social commentary, combined with the complex romantic relationships, align with some romantasy tropes. It's a classic example of a love story set against a rich social backdrop, a common element in the genre.
  • The Secret Garden by Frances Hodgson Burnett:While primarily a children's book, it features elements of magic, mystery, and transformation, often present in romantasy. The blossoming of the garden mirrors the characters' personal growth and the budding romance.



💥💥   STEAMPUNK  FANTASY  💥💥

Steampunk Fantasy is also a more modern 'separate book genre'.  The classics I list below have been around for sometime and lived under either the general Science Fiction category or historical fiction, depending upon how much Victorian history the story contained versus how much science fiction it contained.  .

Steampunk is similar to Urban fantasy but has the addition of Victorian-era technology, in particular, steam and steam-technology.  What fog and forests are to gothic books, steam and steam-based technology are to Steampunk.  They tend to also add some narrative about Victorian era industrialism, either good or bad.   It combines historical events, science fiction and fantasy elements.  Stories are usually set within the 19th century or a similar era.

Three classic books are:

  • Twenty Thousand Leagues Under the Sea by Jules Verne: This classic adventure novel features advanced technology and underwater exploration, elements often found in Steampunk.
  • The Time Machine by H.G. Wells: Though primarily a science fiction novel, it explores themes of technology and time travel that resonate with Steampunk aesthetics.
  • From the Earth to the Moon by Jules Verne: Another Verne classic, this novel showcases imaginative technology and space exploration, aligning with Steampunk's fascination with invention.

💥💥   HOPE PUNK  FANTASY  💥💥

hope-punk-exampleA new subgenre for those who like the steampunk aesthetic and/or urban fantasy, Hope Punk Fantasy contains these elements but without all the hopelessness or grim outlook.  The story is more hope and/or happiness based.

These books are popular Hopepunk although not quite as old as some of the other cited classics:

  • A Psalm for the Wild-Built by Becky Chambers: This novel beautifully captures the essence of Hope Punk with its focus on community, healing, and environmentalism. It presents a hopeful vision of a future where robots and humans coexist peacefully.
  • The Long Way to a Small, Angry Planet by Becky Chambers: Another work by Chambers, this novel explores themes of diversity, acceptance, and cooperation, creating a sense of optimism in a challenging universe.
  • The Goblin Emperor by Katherine Addison: Although not explicitly labeled Hope Punk, this novel showcases themes of resilience, empathy, and building community in the face of adversity, aligning with the genre's core values.

While these works might not be considered classic bestsellers in the traditional sense, they are influential and widely acclaimed examples of contemporary Hope Punk literature.



Book Genres – Urban Fantasy – Dark Fantasy – Grim Dark Fantasy

Books-shelves-of-booksIn our last installment, we covered the top three book genres: High Fantasy, Epic Fantasy and Low Fantasy.  Now we will drill down into the Fantasy sub-genre categories.

If you're a reader, knowing all the categories and what makes them different from one another will help you find the very books you love to read.  As an author, it will help you find the best genre to position your book in the marketplace.

And if you are looking to 'write to market' as some authors do, knowing the expectations and subtle differences between the various genres can help you zero in on what expectations your readership will have.

💥💥   Urban Fantasy  💥💥

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Urban Fantasy is similar to Low Fantasy with one or two exceptions.  One exception is the setting.  The story takes place in our world and in a modern city setting.  It can be at another time in the past or in the future, but it takes place on Earth in a city.

Urban Fantasy blends the mundane with the magical, setting fantastical elements within a modern urban environment.  It often explores the hidden world of supernatural beings coexisting with humans.

The other difference between low fantasy and urban fantasy is that the  environment and characters are grittier, edgier and  tougher.  Low Fantasy takes place in secluded environments like castles, or rural or suburban environments so the world can be almost fairytale like.  Urban fantasy takes place in the bustle and grit of a city.

What distinguishes Urban Fantasy from Low Fantasy is there is a grittier environment and there can be violence. The characters are more human, grittier and they can be morally ambiguous.

Three books that are examples of Urban Fantasy are:

  • The Dresden Files by Jim Butcher: This series is a modern classic of Urban Fantasy, featuring a private investigator with magical abilities in a contemporary setting.
  • Anita Blake: Vampire Hunter by Laurell K. Hamilton: A popular series blending romance, horror, and fantasy in a modern urban setting.
  • American Gods by Neil Gaiman: While not strictly Urban Fantasy, it explores the coexistence of old and new gods in modern America, blurring the lines between myth and reality.

💥💥   Dark Fantasy  💥💥

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Dark Fantasy is a subgenre of the Low fantasy genre.  Dark Fantasy blends elements of fantasy with horror, with more of an emphasis on the horror aspects.  Think Cinderella vs. Dracula.  This genre explores themes of darkness, supernatural elements such as magic, ghosts, vampires, werewolves and other fantastical creatures who enter our world.

There is also a focus on the psychological, how this is affecting one or more characters in the story.  Due to the emphasis on horror, there is an underlying sense of fear, unease and dread running through the story.  These stories tend to focus on the darker aspects of the human  psyche; think accidental manslaughter vs. Jack the Ripper.

Characters often face internal struggles, psychological struggles, madness, or obsession.  Magic, demons, ghosts, or otherworldly creatures are common in this genre.

Ambiguous morality: The lines between good and evil can often be blurred, although not always.  Sometimes good wins out, but in dark fantasy, you can't count on it.

These stories also takes place in our world, but unlike urban fantasy, they usually take place in secluded environments like castles, forests, rural or isolated settings.

Three examples of Dark Fantasy:

  • Dracula by Bram Stoker: A quintessential work of Gothic horror, Dracula blends elements of horror and romance, creating a dark and atmospheric tale.
  • The Picture of Dorian Gray by Oscar Wilde: While often classified as a psychological horror novel, it incorporates supernatural elements and explores the darker aspects of human nature, aligning with Dark Fantasy themes.
  • The Shining by Stephen King: Though primarily a horror novel, The Shining delves into psychological horror and explores the supernatural, making it a strong example of Dark Fantasy.



💥💥   Grim Dark Fantasy  💥💥

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Grim Dark Fantasy is a rather new genre and it is a sub-genre of Dark Fantasy.  What distinguishes a grim dark fantasy from a garden-variety dark fantasy is that the world it takes place in is bleak, often violent and brutal.  There can be gore alongside the horror in this genre too.

This genre always focuses on morally-ambiguous characters, anti-heroes and it can be an environment where evil triumphs.  There's no promise of a happy ending.  Grim Dark fantasy also has a cynical voice running through the narrative, a hopelessness, even despair.

Three books that fall into this category are:

  • The Black Company by Glen Cook: Often cited as a foundational work in the Grimdark genre, this series features anti-heroes, morally ambiguous characters, and a gritty, cynical world.
  • A Song of Ice and Fire by George R.R. Martin: Though not exclusively Grimdark, Martin's series showcases many Grimdark elements with its morally complex characters, brutal violence, and bleak worldview.
  • The First Law trilogy by Joe Abercrombie: A modern classic of Grimdark, this series is renowned for its anti-heroes, dark humor, and unflinching  portrayal of war and its consequences.
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Book Genres – High Fantasy – Epic Fantasy & Low Fantasy

book spineBefore Amazon.com became a behemoth online bookseller, there may have been 20 genres in all of Bookdom. It was all based ono the space available, book cases available and how large he bookstore or library was. All fantasy books were in one section of the store. From there, you needed to come through the author names alphabetically or ask a store clerk if they remembered seeing the book. KDP Publishing and the Website whiz kids at Amazon put an end to that over the last decade or two.Now there are multiple genres of Fantasy and each one can be differentiated by a slight difference. Let's take a look at them starting with the three largest categories: High Fantasy, Epic Fantasy and Low Fantasy.

💥💥   High Fantasy  💥💥

LEO-high-fantasyThis genre is made up of stories that open up a whole new world, with its own geography, culture and even people -- there could be creatures of any and all kinds. These stories are alive with lots of magic, mythology, legends and folklore. High fantasy usually deals with large-scale problems and conflicts. There are life and death stakes and the main characters are heroes, heroines and most are destined for greatness. Their journey is about fulfilling their destiny and/or saving their world from disaster. High fantasy can be more personal than Epic fantasy. High fantasy can be about personal drama, relationships while Epic Fantasy is usually bigger and more about saving the Kingdoms or a whole group of people.

  • The Lord of the Rings by J.R.R. Tolkien
  • The Chronicles of Narnia by CS Lewis
  • The Wizard of Earthsea by Ursula K. Le Guin

💥💥   Epic Fantasy  💥💥

LEO-epic-fantasyEpic fantasy is very similar to High Fantasy in that it introduces the reader to a whole world conjured up by the author, with a unique geography, weather, history and creatures.  Epic fantasy also has lots of magic and other worldly powers, all of which have rules and boundaries that are followed.  Epic fantasy can have folklore, but there is more of an emphasis on myths and legends that are weaved in and out of the story.

Epic fantasy has the highest stakes, world-altering stakes, life and death stakes.  They have sweeping narratives, a large cast of characters with the emphasis on kingdoms, countries or large tribes of people.

Epic fantasies are long sweeping narratives with complex plotlines.  They are long stories, detailed, even multi-generational sagas.

Three classic examples of Epic Fantasy:

  • The Lord of the Rings by J.R.R. Tolkien:  This series, again, is a prime example of Epic Fantasy due to its vast scope, world-altering stakes, and large cast of characters.
  • The Wheel of Time by Robert Jordan: A monumental series known for its intricate plot, expansive world, and numerous characters, embodying the essence of Epic Fantasy.
  • The Malazan Book of the Fallen by Steven Erikson: This series is renowned for its complex mythology, morally ambiguous characters, and epic scale, making it a cornerstone of the genre.


NOTE:  Lord of the Rings was cited in both High Fantasy and Epic Fantasy as it fits comfortably in each one.  It stared out as high fantasy, but due to the sequels, it is now more of an epic fantasy.

💥💥   Low Fantasy  💥💥

LEO-low-fantasyWhen I first heard of this genre and found out that many vampire books fit into this category, I wasn't happy.  It sounds awful -- 'low fantasy'.  What kind of a name is that?  However, the low fantasy refers to the level of magic and world-building that takes place in a low fantasy book.

In low fantasy, there are elements of magic, but not quite as much as you would find in high fantasy or epic fantasy.  Low fantasy is the genre where magic enters the ordinary world.  The narratives are grounded on earth, and the focus is on how the magical elements and powers or supernatural creatures living on earth interact with he real world.  It contains elements of the supernatural that take place against the normal world.

Often, the supernatural or fantasy takes place in our world but is hidden only known to one or two characters in the story.  These stories usually take place in a suburban or rural setting -- as opposed to a city setting, which would make it more of an urban fantasy -- which we will cover next.

Four classic novels that would fit into the Low Fantasy Genre:

  • The Picture of Dorian Gray by Oscar Wilde: While not strictly fantasy, this novel introduces supernatural elements into a realistic setting, making it a precursor to Low Fantasy.
  • The Strange Case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde by Robert Louis Stevenson: This classic tale explores the duality of human nature through a fantastical lens, fitting the Low Fantasy mold.
  • Dracula by Bram Stoker would also fit into the Low Fantasy genre.   Dracula could also fit into a few other newer more nuanced genre categories which we will also cover next.
  • The Lovely Bones by Alice Sebold: This is a best selling contemporary novel that incorporates supernatural elements into a realistic setting, blurring the lines between the mundane and the magical.


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Writers Research – Gypsies from All Over the World

ROMANI (GYPSY SUBGROUPS) EXPLAINED:

Look what I found!  This young man explains all of the different subgroups inside the World of Romani.  These are the gypsies that are often referred to in fantasy and even vampire stories.  I thought this was a great find because these subgroups exist all over the world.

He gives the names of each subgroup on screen, so if you want to do further research, it will be easier to do.  This was a great find, so that’s why I’m including it in my Writer’s Research section.

 



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Book Marketing – Where Do I Start?

BOOK MARKETING STARTS BY SETTING MARKETING GOALS:

wooden-figure-reading-bookEach writer or author will have slightly different goals.  My blog post will speak directly to website bloggers and/or to fiction authors.  However, if you publish low-content books or children’s books —  or even coloring books, all of these techniques will be relevant to you because they are about basic marketing.  Just change up whatever technique is mentioned and make it more fitting to whatever type of marketing you need to do.

ESTABLISH REALISTIC MARKETING GOALS:

Marketing is not something that you do.  It’s something that you build.  Everyone has a first day and sits behind a computer not knowing what to do first.  So let’s start there.

BUILD A READERSHIP:

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If you are self-publishing any kind of books or launching a blog  from scratch, you will need to build a readership.  Building a readership is also something you build over time.  Everyone starts with no readers but their parents or spouses.  However, once you establish a building process, the readers will accumulate slowly but surely.

One of the only things left that professional publishers can offer authors is an automatic reader list.  They have gathered millions of names, addresses and emails over fifty years or more.  So that is a valuable commodity and the one and only reason you should think about being with a professional publishing company.

However, some younger people who are social media savvy have been able to build millions of followers as an “influencer” so don’t count yourself out as someone who may have good luck with self-marketing.

If you are authoring fiction and selling books, your first order of business is to start collecting emails into a reader list.  A reader list is referred to as a “newsletter list” in the industry, but when you are building a readership, I prefer “reader list”.  Going forward, just know they are the same thing.

email-graphicSTART COLLECTING EMAILS:  Collecting emails to send to people about your book or books.  I would recommend MailerLite as they are the least expensive but professional platform for a beginner.  Everyone starts with a free account.  They allow you to collect a couple of hundred emails before they want to get paid.  And then they charge you per hundred or so.  So your expenses keep steady with your marketing results.

JOIN GOODREADS:  Establish a presence on GoodReads.com where the most avid and voracious readers hang out.  Sign up for an account with them and you will get a chance to upload your book cover.  It can be a little confusing at

Goodreads so I’ll post a video about joining and navigating around there.

The biggest tip I can give you is that Goodreads is a website about readers.  When you log in, it recognizes you only as a reader until you go to your author dashboard.  It took me a long, long time to figure this out.  I was always looking for my book and I was disoriented within five minutes.



ESTABLISH LOCAL COMMUNITY CONTACT:  Every library would be interested in who their local authors are.  You can set up a talk and sell some books when you do a book launch.

I personally am too shy (and too old) to go this route, but if you happen to be a bit younger or extroverted, this can create a HUGE BUZZ.  Local people become fans, they tell people they know you, they buy paperbacks and hardcovers — and many want you to sign them!  So don’t underestimate the life of the buzz you can create by talking about your book in front of a few people at the local library.

KINDLE SELECT:  Seriously consider entering your book into Kindle Select on Amazon so you can give away many books each quarter.  This is the quickest way to get attention and reviews.  The more readers you have, the better the odds of getting a review.

Many new authors get too hung up on how long it took them to write the book and they don’t like the idea of not getting paid for it.  However, Amazon is the biggest search engine for books.  That means that your competition is Steven King, Nora Roberts, Lee Childs, Agatha Christie, etc.

It’s important to understand that allowing people to read your book may create a fan, a repeat reader.  That’s your realistic goal.  Unless you have hundreds or thousands you can put into marketing each month, you will be building a readership one reader at a time.

LOW-BID AMAZON AD STRATEGY:  And the last step for absolute beginners is to learn strategies for low-bid strategies (going for the low-hanging fruit) using Amazon Ads.  This is where you bit .12 cents a click.  You won’t rocket to the top of the best seller list, but this is a great strategy to begin to crawl your way out of oblivion.  I’ll have a dedicated blog post about how to set up a low-bit strategy.

BUILD A SOCIAL MEDIA PRESENCE:

First-things-first-arrowI personally don’t like social media — the whole thing.  However, I also don’t really like marketing either!  But in today’s world, if you want to self publish, you need to market your books or blog and there are lots of ways to market even if you are shy or introverted, like I am.

First establish Social Media Accounts in your professional Name.  This could be your author name, pen name, website name, blogging handle, or some other name that is dedicated to your business.  Don’t blend any personal social media with your professional social media presence.

So the first thing to do is to establish accounts at all of the following social media platforms:

FACEBOOK – Facebook is the biggest arena for Boomers, who are retired and have the most money and the most time to read.  So you need to establish a presence on Facebook even if you are younger and don’t use it yourself.  As stated above, create a Business Page in your author name, blog name, website name or pen name.  This will be dedicated to subjects around your writing.  If you don’t know how to do this, just search on YouTube for “How to start a Facebook Page”.

TWITTER-NOW-KNOWN-AS X:  This website is growing quickly.  It has the largest political group and finance group, both left and right, on the internet.  This group too also tends to be economically comfortable and will buy what they want.  If you don’t write about politics, it’s okay.  You will be  “posting to google analytics”.  More on that below.

Posting to Google Analytics means that Google spider bots crawl the internet without stop.  They are constantly cataloguing and making decisions about who is an authority on what subject all the time.  So even if you don’t get a lot of views or reposts, the google bots are still absorbing what you are doing.

I don’t get that many reposts, but the most traffic that comes to my website is from Google.  So it’s still working.  It’s important to know this so you don’t feel like you’re being ignored or wasting your time.

LINKEDIN – If you write on business or off any type of service, anything business people would need or like, then you want to establish a presence on LinkedIn as well.  Most people don’t look for their next book or interesting blogs on LinkedIn, but again, you are posting to the algorithms.  In the next installment, I’ll be going over how to find complementary products and/or interests to post about, especially if you only have one book.

GAB – This website is a bit controversial because they had a big fight years ago with the ADL, but it is still a place that has a huge Christian presence.  I’ve never seen anything anti-Jewish or antisemitic posted so I’m not sure what the big todo was about, but in any event, I thought I would mention this.  It could have been just a big ego fight between two guys.  But if you write Christian fiction, like I do, or write things that fellow Christians, patriots, or other spiritual people may be interested in, you will want to establish a presence on Gab.  Just don’t let this be your own social media because it really specializes in Christian and Patriotic users and they are not the only readers out there.

INSTAGRAM:  You also need to post to Instagram.  This social media website has a much younger demographic that uses it, but they are also glued to their screens all the time.  Instagram is very popular and has lots of graphic posts as well as videos.

PINTEREST – Establish a business page with Pinterest.  Pinterest has millions of users and is probably the biggest search engine next to Google and Amazon.  So this is a must.  Again, don’t mix business with personal.  Establish a page as an author, blogger, or writer.

There are ways to create many different pictorial posts representing one book, so be sure to join Pinterest right away.

TIKTOK:  If you’re thirty-five and older, I would recommend holding off on TikTok, mainly because it is a platform for videos.  Candid videos.  There was a trend called “Booktok” that was pretty popular for awhile, but it got so competitive, I think it has blown over — unless you can post videos everyday.

Tiktok is also battling for survival with the US Courts.  No one knows their fate at the time of this writing.  However, like I said earlier, their platform is for video only.  People under 35 have grown up videoing themselves all day long, so posting on Tiktok is easy for them.  But for those of us over 35, making a video could be a half day or full day affair.  So with that warning, I’ll leave it up to you to decide whether Tiktok is for you.

ESTABLISH A PLAN OF ACTION:

First:  It’s only a plan of action if you do something about it all.  So be sure to open your social media accounts in the next days if you haven’t established them already.

Second:  Establish a mailing list on one of the many platforms out there.  I would recommend MailerLite as the first email collection platform.  There are others out there but the last time I did research — which was about six months previous to this blog post — they were the best deal for the monthly money.  I was paying almost $135 a month to Mailchimp (I had about 3500 emails) and I got the same program for $35 a month at MailerLite.

Most programs start free, but don’t underestimate how soon you will build up a following.

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How to do a Double-Opt-In Email and Giveaway at MailerLite

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Above is a diagram of most of the moving parts involved in setting up a give away using a double opt-in email and automation at Mailerlite.  Seeing it visually will help you understand all the bits and pieces I talk about in the video that goes along with this post.

The video below is a comprehensive tutorial about setting up a giveaway using a double-opt-in email, and sending an email containing a link to a download for an infographic.



For self-publishers, building a reader list, sometimes referred to as a newsletter list, it is important to find ways to build your readership.  By offering occasional giveaways, you can build your list a little faster.

People love infographics that organize and simplify information, so that is what I decided to offer as a giveaway in the offer in the video.

WHAT IS A DOUBLE OPT IN EMAIL?

A double-opt in email is one where the person signs up but then they must go and retrieve the email in order to confirm it is a live email.  It presents you from gathering made up emails.  It keeps your reader list clean of fake emails.

WHAT WILL BE COVERED IN THE VIDEO?

Like the picture above, I will cover the entire process from uploading the giveaway to Google drive and getting the proper link for the ultimate email form.

Then we go to Mailerlight and I walk you through the system as I set up a give away using the double opt-in email.

At the end, I then show you how it works.  I also give a secret tip at the end about what to do with all the links you have gathered in order to put something like this together.

VIDEO TIMELINE:

00:01 – What we will cover in the video
Outlining all the components and links we will need
07:57 – Uploading the document at Google Drive
11:17 – MailerLite – First Form, the Sign up form and Success Message
15:20 – Email Settings (I leave them all unchecked)
16:00 – Creating the automation, the workflow
17:50 – Create the Email that is launched when the form is filled out
18:40 – Selecting a Mailerlite Template
20:00 – Creating an Email Template
20:50 – Adding the Google Drive link to the Email Form
22:00 – How to save the finished Email as a reuseable Template
23:00 – Set up the double Opt in
24:00 – How to find the direct link to the Mailerlink Form
27:00 – How the form works

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How to Plan and Execute a Character Arc

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I write novels in series and like there to be a personal subplot that takes place over each book, but another longer arc that takes place over the entire book series.    In order to pull this off, I need to be very organized and deliberate in how I let the character arc play out not only over time but over the book series as well.

This blog post is about my process in doing that.  Now, I don’t claim this to be the only way to go about it, but it is the way I do it and it works for me.  This process is not how I started out working on character arcs!   I learned the hard way that it’s important to know in the very beginning how you will allow the book arc and the series arc plays out.

I know there are long multi-book series where the main character is more of an action hero and he/she doesn’t change much.  Legal thrillers and the Jack Reacher book series comes to mind.  This does work as Lee Childs and other successful authors can attest to.  They have sold millions of copies with these stock hard-boiled characters who remain generally the same over the entire series.

I prefer there to be more character growth in each book, plus, I like there to be a series arc as well.  My series are shorter than Mr. Child’s but each writer has to find their own place.  I like shorter series with the main characters participating in more of a family drama and/or a romantic subplot.



THE FIRST STEP IN SETTING UP A CHARACTER ARC IS TO ESTABLISH THE FOLLOWING:

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Sketch out on a mind map or even a piece of paper the answer to each of the above character development questions.  MC stands for Main Character and ANT stands for Antagonist.  By sketching them out at the same time in the beginning stages, it will give you a strong direction for your writing right from the get go.  Of course, if you have more than one main character, you will want to repeat this process for every main character.

This also allows you to see and create a conflict between the main character and the antagonist.  This is particularly helpful to new writers who lean towards making all characters “too nice”.  Without some level of conflict, there won’t be enough conflict or drama to move forward in the story.  It will simply be an “and-then-this-happened, and-then-this-happened” kind of story.

BREAK THE ENTIRE CHARACTER ARC INTO THREE OR FOUR PARTS:

I use a four-part plot structure, so I break my character arc into four sections.  This allows me to keep up with the character development and also don’t resolve the inner conflict too early.

I find this technique also gives me solid writing boundaries and/or writing guideposts.  When I’m in Part 2, I know my goal for this section is to make sure the planned character arc for Part 2 is completed before I move to part 3.

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A LITTLE ADVICE ABOUT WRITING IN SERIES:

Now that I’ve written my third book series, I think in terms of multiple-book character acts.   As I start out with new characters in a new series, I make sure that I have many options of where these characters can go over the entire series.

A special note to pantsers:  This technique gives guideposts and boundaries, but every story or novel takes on a creative life of it’s own.  I find by having the character arc written down and sectioned, it makes it easier to change the story as this creative process takes over.  I simply look over the character arc and alter it with the new “better idea” that has come up.

I find it gives me the best of both worlds.  I have a strong direction when I am writing, but flexibility and ease are built into the process itself.  It’s super easy to change mid-stream by just tweaking the character arc a bit.

I hope this helps new writers!

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How to Brainstorm A New Story

WHAT TO DO IF YOU NEED TO WRITE A STORY AND YOU’RE STUCK:

Mastering the art of writing captivating mysteries. Unleash your creativity and weave intricate tales of crime and suspense.

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MYSTERY NOVEL BRAINSTORMING WORKSHEET

This worksheet is geared for those who want to write a mystery or crime novel.  It helps with writer’s block too.  It breaks down the process into small bite-sized pieces and it will get your motor going without any effort. 

Just follow the suggestions, summed up easily below, and you will have at least the start of something within minutes.   There is a link below to download the three-page instructional and checklist.  

If you are an intermediate novel writer, here is a graphic of the overall process without the instructional questions:  

THIS WORKSHEET HAS MULTIPLE PURPOSES: 

writers-block-at-nightIf you are stumped for a main story, or if you are stumped for what happens now, or even if you have written yourself into a bit of a corner, this instructional will help, along with your own creativity and thinking, to bring about new possibilities. 

Jump into the series of steps wherever you are in the writing process and it will help you restart your engine. Once you go through the process a time or two, I’m sure it will become your go-to procedure.  

THE LISTS | CHOOSE FROM COLUMN A AND COLUMN B:

Below is a closer look at Page 3 of the Worksheet where it will give you a wide birth of choices for mysteries and/or crimes.  It’s hard for one mind to think of all the possibilities without some kind of aid no matter how creative one is.  

START THE WORKSHEET BY CHOOSING A CRIME OR MYSTERY:

Let’s talk about how to use this work sheet.  Choose a crime or mystery from the list below and make up a potential perpetrator.  Don’t waste time on what he or she looks like.  Then start asking the following questions:

  • Why would this person want to commit this crime?
  • What could be going on in his/her life that would make him/her feel they needed to commit this crime?
  • How would he want to cover his tracks?
  • What specific knowledge would a character need to pull off a crime or swindle like this? In other words, is he/she an accountant and that makes it easier to commit a financial crime?
  • Then ask: Who would need to help him or give him/her cover? Add necessary characters and think about a connection.  Is it a family connection?  Is it a romantic connection?

THE NEXT SET OF QUESTIONS TO ASK:

Design-a-plotlineOnce you have a perpetrator and the cast of necessary characters, then it’s time to answer the following questions:

  • What could go wrong in the commission of this crime that would create tension or mystery? (He drops a glove or a drop of blood.)
  • How will these clues ultimately lead to his/her exposure? (How will this clue be found?)
  • How can this end in a way that would let justice prevail? (How and who will find the clue?)
  • How will the culprit ultimately be caught? (Is he cornered by an accuser? Is he arrested?  Does he confess?)
  • What is one clue that can be minimized in the beginning of the story but will turn out to be the one who catches the bad guy?

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NEXT SET OF QUESTIONS:

  • List the things that could go right for the perpetrator — like a second, more-likely suspect pops up and suddenly all eyes are not on the real culprit anymore?
  • Could there be other likely suspects that would also have motivation to commit the crime?
  • As the story grows, add whatever crucial characters are needed (witnesses, husbands, wives, bosses, helpers, etc.) who you will need to make the crime and solving of the story happen.
  • If you get this far, it means that you have a viable storyline.

THE SKELETON OF THE CRIME:

skeleton of a crimeBefore you exert too much energy fleshing out any character or story details, be sure to check to make sure you can design a three-prong storyline out of this budding storyline.  One prong will be a red herring storyline, someone who may look guilty, but is exonerated in the middle or end of the story.  The second prong is a second suspect or a wrong suspect who will look guilty for a large segment of the storyline.  And the final prong will be for the real culprit.  In order to have a story that works, you will need a believable crime that can meld these three prongs into one suspenseful story.

Create an illustration of a writer sitting at a desk trying to think of something.As you use this worksheet and these techniques, a crime skeleton will emerge.  Some attempts at this will go flat in the early stages for any number of reasons.  But some storylines will begin to almost shape themselves.

I always make four believable storylines and then choose the best one.  Then I know I have the best of my ability at that time in my life.  Once you know you have a storyline and a lineup of stick figures and character roles that can technically pull off the mystery, so to speak, then you can begin to build real characters and an actual story.

THE CHARACTERS BUILD THEMSELVES:

Once you know what will be needed for the three-pronged storyline and what traits the lead characters will need to play out their parts, the characters will start building themselves into two-dimensional characters.  You can take the characters up to deeper, three-dimensional characters as you flesh out your main story and subplots.

LIST OF MYSTERIES, CRIMES & GENRES

I hope this is helpful.  Once you know you have a workable storyline, then it’s time to take a look at my Ultimate Character Development Worksheet.  This will help you bring the stick figures to three-dimensional with a full character arc.